NomadMaleVer2.blp

[Moderator]

16:38, 23th Dec 2011
M0rbid: The skin still lacks the same things mostly, while you did improve it quite a bit, it still needs additional work, set to "Rejected until updated" until further updates.

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12:49, 13th Dec 2011
M0rbid: A nice start, however the skin yet lacks a few things needed for approval. Basically the skin overall is not sharp enough, it looks like you used a lot of smudge tool. Instead, try working with small scaled brushes to get the work done more efficiently. I like your colour choice, however I feel like you could have experimentet with the wrap a little more. Maybe - that could at least be worth a try - you could reskin the hair to a hood, which would fit a nomad quite well. My main concern is sharping out the skin though. As for additional details and experiments with the wrap that would be an additional upgrade. "Pending" for now so that the users can give you more feedback and inspiration.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

cool idea, bad execution, it's too blurry D: work on that mate!

 

[Misha]

hm.. shows freehand, but you still need to practice :3

check out the 2D tutorials here, they really help

 

[rcshaggy]

Reminds me of a Defias that got tanned in the Barrens.
Its a really good idea, just needs work.

 

[Stanakin]

It actually looks pretty cool, but I guess it needs more changes from the original in order to be approved.

 

[Xian]

Awesome skin,i think it's obviously free-hand
Voting for Approval on this one 4/5

 

[Kazandaki]

Thank you all so much for your nice comments,i will surely make a new version with counting your advices and critics.
I am a little busy these days so that may take a little while,yet again,thanks all for commenting!

 

[Sin'dorei300]

cool idea, bad execution, it's too blurry D: work on that mate!

Agree...

 

[Kazandaki]

Agree...

Using the tutorials,i sure will make it better. So please keep up for updates,if you will

EDIT:
V2 is up! Now it looks way much better i think! I hope you will like it and care for telling me your ideas,thanks in advance!

 

[Misha]

dude, everything needs to be defined, and this is just a blob.. the guy friken melted

 

[Kazandaki]

dude, everything needs to be defined, and this is just a blob.. the guy friken melted

I'm sorry i tried to make it better and more define,i guess i failed but this is truly all i can do,i can work with pants a little bit mroe thou,and i will work on that.

 

[Cakedog345]

Don't give up!
Add some highlights (a little) on shoulders, boots, chest ...
Try to sharpen more.

 

[Kazandaki]

Don't give up!
Add some highlights (a little) on shoulders, boots, chest ...
Try to sharpen more.

Thank you so much for your comment,
I will work on that,right now i am trying to sharpening it,i may do bandages all over again haha
Thanks for the feedback!

EDIT


Guys,i am back with a sketch of what's coming up,please check it out and tell me what should i do BEFORE i edit it on photoshop,please.
Thank you in advance!

Sketch