Nerubian Guardian

[Eagle XI]

That weapon's blade needs some more shape, currently it looks as if made out of stone.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Interesting; it's good to have a 'baseline' Nerubian.

 

[MogulKahn]

You should work more on those animations

 

[HappyCockroach]

Moderation Comment:

MatiS, your models aren't far from being decent and useful assets. There's just a few issues it would be great if you could fix/improve.

• Animations, as mentioned here, need to be improved. You need to think motion from high hierarchy bones to low hierarchy. That means, firstly animate the bone_root, then animate the torso, then the shoulders, then arms, lastly hands. You're moving only root and arms here. It lacks a general motion flow. I've put up a quick GIF to explain to you. It isn't 100% accurate, but what I'm showing you is that every bone should follow the flow of the movement you're making, not only the first and the last one. And try to give a "after-movement" to make it less stiff. Like, when you raise your head, first raises your torso, a couple of frames later, your neck, and then your head. That gives more flow to your animation.
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  There are some weird rotations too, as after attack. You could remove tweaks in general at those anims.
  
  
• I don't see much of a reason to have 4 variations, given they look very alike in-game. Maybe if you make them differ more, or reduce the variation number. Basically, the undead and the nerubian one have too little difference, only a slight skin tone variation, and it's not like it's worth it.
  Big similarity between them

  
  
  
  
• You have a couple of seams at the texture. Try to make your mesh edges have texture contours at them, so you make those rough edges disappear.

I'd also say it feels a bit too skinny, but changing that anatomy is up to you. If you have any doubt, don't hesitate asking. Awaiting update. (And sorry for the delay in moderating, I hope you have the editables with you)

 

[Frostfaust]

You ever going to fix this, MatiS? People would love to use this.

 

[loktar]

No changes made, moved to Substandard.