Naruto cinematic in two days .. Vote it

[jonhysone]

I made Naruto fan animation cinematic by Warcraft .. Rate it and tell me what is wrong with it

By the way , It has many many mistakes , But my friend was stressed dafuq I needed to upload it for him ... , from mistakes : Rasen shuriken throw animation , Rasengan is still in naruto's hand after explosion ...etc , Just get the idea DDDD

 

[MortAr]

its not 3d -.-

 

[Radicool]

Really nice man

One thing I'd recommend are some sound effects. At the moment there is little to none.

For example. Those "puff" sounds when the shadow clones die. A grunting noise before Naruto becomes the nine tails. A nine tails roar sound after the transformation is complete. A tailed beast bomb charging sound, etc. Maybe even some dialogue. Just use key quotes from the series. Pherhaps when Naruto is dying on the ground, use one of Sasukaes lines. Preferably the English dub. Whatever you do, don't over use dialogue, and make sure it makes sense to the fight. Too much talking in a fight makes me sick. Also, a sound at 29 seconds when Naruto hits the ground. Like a "smack" kind of noise against the dirt. Expecially sound effects like "argh" and "Oph". Naruto makes plenty of noise when he gets hit or is in pain or makes an attack.

Sound effects out of the way, maybe add a nicer terrain. A few shrubs here and there. A more fitting ground texture. I don't know if the white stuff is suppose to be snow, because there's random brown and green.

The camera angles, pans and zooms are amazing. But be careful of cutting out the ground. At 2.25 for instance.

Really great work though. Hope to see an update.

 

[jonhysone]

its not 3d -.-

lol!

 

[Rheiko]

yeah its not 3D, what trickery is this?

well, about the cinematic
improve the terrain, the current terrain is... a bad combination, as radicool mentioned before.. green, brown, white tiles.. what the hell is that?
and make use of naruto's clones
they are just standing there doing nothing

 

[jonhysone]

Why not 3D?

 

[Rheiko]

because it's not

 

[chobibo]

I agree with Radicool, I'll just recommend you sculpt the terrain more. Good work man.

Why not 3D?

They're saying that the video isn't in stereoscopic 3D format.

 

[jonhysone]

I agree with Radicool, I'll just recommend you sculpt the terrain more. Good work man.


They're saying that the video isn't in stereoscopic 3D format.

Tnx , btw
It's 3D but not in format , it's 3D in camera , models oO
that's funny !D

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Tnx , btw
It's 3D but not in format , it's 3D in camera , models oO
that's funny !D

lol yeah but he means his screen is 2d >.>

 

[BlackEnvyX]

It's honestly a pretty average cinematic.
There are several things that need to be worked on.

#1: The Terrain. It's flat, tiles don't mix and there's not a doodad in sight. As a rather big fan of Naruto, I'm pretty sure there are no locations in the anime world with such styled terrain.

#2: The Camera. It's panned too far away from the characters and too close to the ground in multiple shots. It also switches viewpoints rather awkwardly. Like in that one segment where Naruto was sliding across the ground, the camera should not have been so close to the ground. The camera should have been facing where Sasuke would be looking forward when he teleported to Naruto's body.

Other than that it's a decent start, but nowhere near complete in my opinion.

 

[jonhysone]

It's honestly a pretty average cinematic.
There are several things that need to be worked on.

#1: The Terrain. It's flat, tiles don't mix and there's not a doodad in sight. As a rather big fan of Naruto, I'm pretty sure there are no locations in the anime world with such styled terrain.

#2: The Camera. It's panned too far away from the characters and too close to the ground in multiple shots. It also switches viewpoints rather awkwardly. Like in that one segment where Naruto was sliding across the ground, the camera should not have been so close to the ground. The camera should have been facing where Sasuke would be looking forward when he teleported to Naruto's body.

Other than that it's a decent start, but nowhere near complete in my opinion.

I love you

No gayness -_-

 

[BlackEnvyX]

I love you

No gayness -_-

It's no problem man. Lol. Just trying to help a fellow cinematic maker.

 

[chobibo]

It's good to see people spreading love.

 

[jonhysone]

It's good to see people spreading love.

Yes , love makes peace and even between religion difference , Skin difference.. No racism ..
LOVE!

 

[Daffa]

Attach a map might make it better for people so they can see it from Warcraft III.

 

[jonhysone]

It's 80 mb :V
My net is weak
Uploading will take Two hours -_-

 

[Daffa]

Let me guess.....
Tons of rips.

 

[BlackEnvyX]

It's 80 mb :V
My net is weak
Uploading will take Two hours -_-

What could possibly be in there that causes it to be 80 mb?

 

[chobibo]

wav files or a bunch of mp3 files.

 

[BlackEnvyX]

wav files or a bunch of mp3 files.

If that's the case, I'll gladly retrieve some tutorials about file compression for him.

 

[chobibo]

I was just guessing lol, I forgot to put that part. Let's wait for a reply.

 

[jonhysone]

I was just guessing lol, I forgot to put that part. Let's wait for a reply.

Nice guess , It's true , It's the soundtracks added , I was too lazy to attach them to a video so I used them directly by Warcraft

 

[chobibo]

I figured all those voices were audio files, specially the music.

 

[Rheiko]

so... where the cinematic?

 

[jonhysone]

its already there XD at youtube

 

[Kazeon]

I haven't read another comments but, for me, the environment is too flat. May be you will make it like the real naruto moment where they both fight each other at a waterfall between two statue

 

[jonhysone]

I haven't read another comments but, for me, the environment is too flat. May be you will make it like the real naruto moment where they both fight each other at a waterfall between two statue

Yeah I thought about this long time ago before I make the cinematic but I haven't found any model that fits the two statues of Final Valley place :/

 

[Kazeon]

Yeah I thought about this long time ago before I make the cinematic but I haven't found any model that fits the two statues of Final Valley place :/

just use statue in cityscape doodads

 

[jonhysone]

just use statue in cityscape doodads

Aajajaj xD It will look very very weird
Need a real one xP

If I don't find any in chaosrealm
I will request one
If not, I will use your idea