My Third Picture

[tunerband]

Tell me if somthing could have been better

 

[ghenjis]

Start out with the basics. It's too flat, try to vary up the ground levels and the tile variation. Also, instead of putting your map effect to rays of sunlight make several small regions spread out and set their environment effect to the sunlight rays. Also, try going to map options and trying different, thicker fogs. It could be better, but it's not a bad start, either.

 

[Oziris]

It is to flat and add light fog.

 

[Gilles]

Tile variation. First thing (other than flat) that I noticed. I also dislike the trees, although that's sort of personal preference.

 

[Tawsix]

Your terrain needs more doodads, it's nekid. Tile and height variation are also needed. And please, for the love of Christ, get rid of those rays of light, they are really cramping up the picture. Try to take pictures that don't show the edge of the map like that, it looks very unrealistic. The infinite blue yonder isn't attractive.

 

[~Void~]

Cap'n! We need more undergrowth!

 

[tunerband]

Ok thank you i have learnt much what i shal do next time.

 

[Bob27]

Maybe try and make the path a bit less straight, in some parts of the path it looks really straight.

 

[~Void~]

I think paths look fine straight, seeing as that's what they are generally meant to be, it's just you should probably put grass on the edges or bushes/lanterns or anything really just to make it look less boring.

 

[Ezikielth]

Cap'n! We need more undergrowth!

Captain-Aye! But, We used all the undergroth ta make rum!!
Crew Member-True and rum is better than undergrowth anyway
First Mate-That be true *Staring at an empty bottle of rum* Only if we had more rum.
Crew- *chanting* mutiny, mutiny, mutiny!!
Captain- DAMN YOU UNDERGROWTH!!

Looks nice but you need undergrowth our your crew of pirates will commit a mutiny.

 

[LordDz]

It reminds me of Zelda