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Well, I worked alot on it and here it is^^ Hope you like it.
 

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Aside from what was mentioned early. I really like the direction of this terrain. The silhouettes look pretty good, and I like the idea you had. Realistically speaking, though, I think with much walking, or original building, the cobble path on the hill would be a little bit flatter rather than going slanted along the hill. Try to also add a little more environmental doodads on the same hill in the second screen. Other than that, well done. ;)
 
Thanks for the comments and criticism ;) I tried to improve the first screen a little bit by adding some more enviromental stuff, but I don't want to spend too much time on one terrain so this is the final screen:
 

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But.. but.. terrainers must spend loads of time on their art.. :/

True, and I did spend alot of time on this, I just think it´s good enough now. Further improving it now would be tiresome and a little bit beyond my terraining skills i think. I already made some more terrains, and studdied other terrains around here, this is the first one that worked out really well and I´m happy with it just how it is now ;)
 
Did Belgarath make a second account?

You should try and tone down the light, it's just too much.
 
The waves are bad, you should probably remove them and use wave doodads a little more sparingly.

Also, that shallow pool could use some tiny rocks for pebbles and maybe some washed up driftwood, just to make it look cool.

I do however like the atmosphere. It's very "paradise"-like.
 
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