My song: Lies

[MAP MASTER]

I little song I made up, rockish my family says when I sing it. Note, this song is both rap and rock.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I didn't think I had a debt to pay
Til they came to take what I had left away
You said you wouldn't put me to the test today
But I remember you saying that yesterday
But there was a time when your mind wasn't out of control
Every memory and confession born out of your soul
Like a pill you couldn't swallow so it swallowed you whole
Another lie hard to follow, it followed you home
And like that
BROKEN DOWN
A victim ofyour PLIGHT
Fire so out of control
Every memory and confession born out of your soul
And like that
BROKEN DOWN
A victim of your LIES
You hide behind
LIES
You dont know
WHY
You crossed the line
WRAPPED UP INSIDE YOUR
LIES
You hide behind
LIES
You're lost inside
That cold disquise
Behind your
LIES
I don't know what I thought I might say
Seems like we never would talk the right way
Every other minute I fought for my place
To drop what I made, thought you might say so
I'm guessing that you probaly know

When your inside's hollow and you want to be cold
Like a pill hard to swallow so it swallowed you whole
Another lie hard to follow, it followed you home
And like that
BROKEN DOWN
A victim of your
LIES
You hide behind
LIES
You don't know
WHY
You crossed the line
WRAPPED UP INSIDE YOUR LIES
You hide behind
LIES
Your lost inside
That cold disguise
BEHIND YOUR LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!












Your faking, your mistaken
If you think that you could climb out of this HOOOOOOOLE
Forsaken, what would take me?
Analyzing by the power of your SOOOOOOOUL
Broken down, a victim of your
Faking, your mistaken
If you think that you could climb out of this HOOOOOOLE
BROKEN DOWN, A VICTIM OF YOUR
LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You hide behind
Lies
You don't know
Why
You hide behind
Lies
You don't know
Why
You hide behind
Lies
You don't know
Why
You hide behind
WRAPPED UP INSIDE YOU LIES
You hide behind
LIES
You don't know
WHY
You crossed the line
WRAPPED UP INSIDE YOUR
LIES
You hide behind
LIES
You're lost inside that cold disguise
BEHIND YOUR LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Sephiyr]

You certainly wtfpwn me at lyrics any days, I like this one! .

 

[MAP MASTER]

I thought it sucked until I sung it at the talent show, I got 50 bucks

 

[Sephiyr]

50 bucks? Much richer than me xD. Nah don't think little of what you do, it could always be great when you preform it . My ones aren't that good.

 

[Eggy]

Its hard to make a song with an ending sound for 4 lines, you almost pulled it off

7/10