my first terrian piece haha

[deathdoorway]

well you guys are all gonna laugh or make fun of my first attempt at art but here it is

Ive updated this due to the fact of everyone making fun of me. The theme is a maze but its an overgrown forest so the pathway is blocked at this angle. In the maze there are many traps as tripwires, bonsai troopers, mines, and many more.

 

[thegreatsmite]

Hey! i can see the end of the world from here!

you need some serious fog, and some hill / mountians int he backround. your grass looks a bit spammy, trim it a bit down. and use UTM custom trees becasue they dont suck XD
im also guessing that the lump of earth the blocks out part of the view is supposed to be there may get rid of that or change it a bit so it goes accros the screen instead of a portion.

 

[deathdoorway]

lol this isn't a scenery type terrain. This is a forest maze for my map. everything where its suppost to be so no worries here.

 

[Celaquil]

You shouldnt say that this is your first attemt on terrain art if your making this for a playable map... <.< Terrain art is something very different!

< Inserts hideous spam of lulz here >

Anyways, those trees and that grass dont go well together, while im on it, dont use those trees, their aweful! Also, yes, you should have some fog, if only for the sake of making this screenshot in particulare look better, and some other sky, that one is a shame. And you need some more hight variety. And thats about it, though dont let the end of the world be viewable!

 

[deathdoorway]

I knew it was bad but thanks for this comment....

< Inserts hideous spam of lulz here >

What does everyone else think

 

[raid1000]

practice more my young friend
have a cookie as a morale booster

 

[thegreatsmite]

raid1000, you never gave me moral boosters

its improving, try using fog.... and the canopy trees look fugly from this angle, but thats not your fault.
i tihnk more rocks and less spamz of grass.
it not bad at all though for a playable map, can you post an in game screen?

 

[~Void~]

Start trying more, you might be surprised at what you make.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

If you submit something that takes you 4 seconds to make, im impressed nobody dissed this yet.

I got one thing to say: This is really bad.

 

[Nbah]

Heyyy, don't be so harsh. This is one of his first terrains. No, it didn't take him 4 seconds to him. Yeah, maybe to you, but this guy clearly just started out. Nobody "dissed" it because they know it's not the most ugliest thing for a beginner! This could have taken him a lot of time to make, it's not that easy, you have to understand it.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Even for a first attempt, don't you think the picture could be organized or a theme? I really don't understand what "were" looking at :/

+rep

 

[deathdoorway]

I'm sry blood for failing you lol. This took me actually a few days to get to look perfect then reediting it took me a whole day of looking around messing with stuff. I'm new to fog so can someone explain how to add cuz i did in map desction. Thanks everyone for your comments. I know how blizzard trees looks horrible at First person camera but my map has no room to import much custom models. Ill try to fix it up more if i could

 

[thegreatsmite]

i take it your game isnt playes in first person... post in-game shots

 

[FrIkY]

Use trees from the UTM, Blizzard trees suck. Kthxbai!

+rep

 

[Cihparg]

Very well, my friend, 'lil advancing and you'll be fine You'r sure gonna be good. Even better than I am, Well, thats not hard... hehe Go look my Terraining... You'll find it with name: OffGraphic's Terraining

+rep for ya!

 

[deathdoorway]

Thanks for all the comments. I'll deff give you guys better in a few days. I'll improve it with all your fixes you suggest.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

I liked the most of it! But those canonpy trees is not good...

 

[Acvong]

I think you need more rocks on the ground with some shrub near it and flowers. Also maybe add in a few critters. And also maybe change the sky but u dont have to coz i reckon the sky doesnt match ur environment.

 

[deathdoorway]

what trees should i use since the trees in warcraft are big shitty stuff at this angle. Ill be adding more rocks and stuff in a few. About the sky it matches more than the other sky's blizzard has. I'm trying to add fog in a few.

 

[Acvong]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f267/ultimate-terraining-map-3-0-a-45316/ - UTM u can find alot of trees and other stuff just dl the map and open it.

 

[deathdoorway]

k thanks i got that map so ill relook at it i guess