"Moonlight"

[~Void~]

This is my campaign screen for a campaign titled Moonlight, although it will most likely never be completed.
If you aren't going to comment, please at least rate it!

Edit: The moon is made out of about 50 fog doodads in a big pile >_>

 

[madcat2]

You did a good job on it.

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

like it, but she doesn't stand out too much, and something about the road I don't like, wish I could be more helpful sorry.

 

[THE_END]

Trees need to be a tad bigger it seems

 

[Gilles]

Isn't it the glow doodad form UTM?

Looks good. I like it a lot. No complaints.

 

[Oziris]

Trees most be biger.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

The screen is rly vague =/

 

[Darth_Muppet]

Needs a little bit more tile variation. And the Dark Ranger does not stick out that much.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

It seems the screenie was so blurry because of the pc i was on =/

Anyways, its nice. Although you might wanna add some grassy dirt between your normal grass tiles on the left lower hill .. and also smooth the left upper one. But thats your decission =p

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It's nice but remove the archer.

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

pretty sure shes there for a reason... i just say dif team color or maybe if possible a dif skin, not a radical dif skin, but something that makes her stand out more.

also didn't notice "50 doodads" makes up moon, looks rly good mind telling me what kind of doodads are in it, cause i suck at terrain.

 

[~Void~]

It's under cinematic, and it's Fog. I tinted it all white instead of the default 50/50/75 tint, and there are actually 26 -- 25 sized at 60 and one (the glow) sized at something like 120.

Trees need to be a tad bigger it seems

You mean like the trees in WoW? Trees are not that big in real life. They are usually more like 20 feet high. Maybe I could get by with these being around 15 feet by saying it's a high mountain altitude

 

[Gilles]

Those trees are pretty small. New growth forest right? lol

You use of background mountains has improved a lot! You're getting really good at it.

 

[~Void~]

Those trees are pretty small. New growth forest right? lol

Yes, orcs came to the forest, burnt it down, and now it grew back

 

[Duke]

yeah it's nice but archer ruin it

 

[Nudl9]

Pretty inspiring and nice.
The background and all the enviroment just makes such a nice atmosphere!
I give it a 5/5 cus its art

 

[~Void~]

yeah it's nice but archer ruin it

How so? You did read that it was a campaign screen, right?

 

[Naze]

Well, Void... You've made better terrain then that. I don't really liked it....

 

[frostwhisper]

I don't know... the ranger seems a bit out of proportion with the trees. Either make her smaller or them bigger.

Also seeing that you used a quick shift to black fog, to make the back hills awesome, you might want to consider either regional or doodad fog for the front (to give it's atmosphere a bit more feeling and not let it look empty).

 

[~Void~]

I don't know... the ranger seems a bit out of proportion with the trees. Either make her smaller or them bigger.

Also seeing that you used a quick shift to black fog, to make the back hills awesome, you might want to consider either regional or doodad fog for the front (to give it's atmosphere a bit more feeling and not let it look empty).

I didn't know about the fog doodad when I made this terrain. Sadly, at 0 tint the fog doodad doesn't make stuff darker it is just invisible.

 

[Rui]

I liked the idea, rated 3/5.
Either the trees are too small or the ranger is too big. The terrain looks ok, although the background could use more work (texture variation). Also, you should not always use rock for cliffs, try to vary with other types of rocks.

As for the moon, which is, apparently, the main idea, it looks weird somewhat. There's a white square which is easily spotted by looking at it.
The combination with the Felwood sky was a good idea, though.

 

[~Void~]

I liked the idea, rated 3/5.
Either the trees are too small or the ranger is too big. The terrain looks ok, although the background could use more work (texture variation). Also, you should not always use rock for cliffs, try to vary with other types of rocks.

As for the moon, which is, apparently, the main idea, it looks weird somewhat. There's a white square which is easily spotted by looking at it.
The combination with the Felwood sky was a good idea, though.

I don't see a white square anywhere...?