Moonglow Forest

[mafe]

Just a few quick thoughts for now:
-Please make try to fix the ramp-cliff transitions. Several of them are non-smooth.
-I would expect that the majority of creeps are positioned in such a way that player units will walk too close accidentially and get attacked.
-Trees are placed in such a way that wisps can be placed on trees where melee units cannot attack them.
-The itemdrops seem to only partially correlate to the strength of the creeps.

But other than that, it looks like a good map to me.
edit: well considering all of this, I think at least some of these issues should be addressed. Therefore set to awaiting update.

 

[mafe]

-So, the ramp-cliff-transitions are good now.
-The creeps at the shop and the 4-4 trolls nearby stll aggro sometimes, which is particulalry annoy with the purge/ensnare at the shops. If it happens, the player units may take a lot of damage. But I didnt notice any other spots, so kinda ok.
-Safe spot for wisps are still there:

At the treees marked in red, wisps cannot be attacked by melee units. There are countless other places like it. Check my comment over here how to correctly place trees for future maps:
Icy Resistance
-Itemdrops look better now, but still kinda weird in some places. The most extreme example is that you have a lvl 19 camp (merc camps) where players get just two lvl 2 items, and a lvl 18 camp (shops) where players get a lvl 3 item, a lvl 2 item and a rune of the watcher. This seems kinda weird to me.

So you fixed some, but not all issues. And given that the forest are ok except for the wisp issue, I think the map is good enough to be approved. But there is still a lot of room for improvement.

A sidenote: Why did you include the Legion Doom Horn among level 4 items? I'm 99,99% sure it is still a lvl 5 item.

 

[DestinyAngel]

Thanks for your review, i will include this surley in future updates.

The loot table from the fountain is the same as the one on concealed Hill and nobody complains about it

 

[mafe]

Thanks for your review, i will include this surley in future updates.

The loot table from the fountain is the same as the one on concealed Hill and nobody complains about it

Pretty sure it is not exactly the same
I checked Concelead Hills (the version from the Frozen Throne/community map folder) and it says that a random lvl 4 permanent item is dropping at the fountains on CH. On your map, you included all 4 permanent items individually and also added Legion Doom Horn. However, Legion Doom Horn is not a lvl 4 item and will not drop on "random lvl 4 permanent item" creepspots (unless I completely missed it in the patch notes), even though for some weird reason, it sometimes says in the editor that Legion Doom Horn is a lvl 4 item.

Also, if you indivually specify the possible itemdrops instead of using the "random lvl x item of class y", you are taking the risk that Blizzard will make changes to some items: Then the items on your map will stay the same, and might be imbalanced. While if you nuse the "random lvl x item" pattern, your map will automatically to any possible item changes with a new patch.

 

[DestinyAngel]

It seems the editor tricked me it says the whole time that doom horn is a lvl 4 item, after another check it was lvl 5 but at the lvl 4 items there was a item called summoning diamond (or like that) thats the reason why i added the doom horn to the other items i did several.
Thats a bit annoying so i´ll change it into the lvl 4 items and will see.
I´ll keep an eye on it