[Cinematic] Minion Battle

[-Sh0ck3r-]

Here is my Minion Battle.Its a story about one Ghoul and one Footman.Ghoul always want the soul of Crusader Footman but he can't get it.Now he has a chance in this battle..Watch it and if you found bugs say please!I wanna to send this map to THV.

 

[Amigurumi]

Okay, watched it, and have to say: it's very short.

>> it's very short, make it longer
>> when the ghoul attacks the footman, and he teleports away, the corpse is still laying there
>> terrain was lacking
>> camera was lacking

you should put more effort in cinematics, because a cinematic should have these things:
>> nice terrain
>> good camera
>> longer watching duration
>> good story

Well, your cinematic don't need a proper story, because it's a battle between two guys.
And every point I listed was lacking. So maybe you make it longer, improve the terrain.

Hope that helps to improve it.

 

[-Sh0ck3r-]

Thanks