Mini Wars Unleashed

[Moderator]

21:51, 2nd Jan 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Toyhobo]

If you wonder whos jeppepeppe90 and Oskar94 is its me and my classmates name on battle.net so the map is not stolen.

 

[Tleno]

If you wonder whos jeppepeppe90 and Oskar94 is its me and my classmates name on battle.net so the map is not stolen.

Most of the map is blank, idea is unoriginal and really simple. Description is bad, there is completely no info about itself, only about your classmate and your name on b.net.
Vote for Rejection until improved.

 

[Aesthetics]

Oh noes, not that Light vs Dark cliche' again.

Trigger Evaluation:

ALL of your spawning triggers point leak.

I don't see what this trigger's purpose is:

World diplomacy

• World diplomacy
  • Events
    • Map initialization
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • -------- Team 1 Diplomacy --------
    • Player - Make Player 1 (Red) treat Player 2 (Blue) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 1 (Red) treat Player 6 (Orange) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 2 (Blue) treat Player 1 (Red) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 2 (Blue) treat Player 6 (Orange) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 6 (Orange) treat Player 1 (Red) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 6 (Orange) treat Player 2 (Blue) as an Ally with shared vision
    • -------- Team 2 Diplomacy --------
    • Player - Make Player 3 (Teal) treat Player 4 (Purple) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 3 (Teal) treat Player 5 (Yellow) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 4 (Purple) treat Player 3 (Teal) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 4 (Purple) treat Player 5 (Yellow) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 5 (Yellow) treat Player 4 (Purple) as an Ally with shared vision
    • Player - Make Player 5 (Yellow) treat Player 3 (Teal) as an Ally with shared vision

Next, this trigger is what we call inefficient. It may or may not matter to you, but in my opinion, in matters.

Player Gold income

• Player Gold Income
  • Events
    • Time - Every 10.00 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Player - Add Gold_Income to Player 1 (Red) Current gold
    • Player - Add Gold_Income to Player 2 (Blue) Current gold
    • Player - Add Gold_Income to Player 3 (Teal) Current gold
    • Player - Add Gold_Income to Player 4 (Purple) Current gold

That could be easily replaced with this during map-making to save time:

Revised

• Player Gold Income Revised
  • Events
    • Time - Every 10.00 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 4, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Player - Add Gold_Income to (Player((Integer A))) Current gold

The same could be done with your lumber income, and whatever triggers that require similar repetitive work.

Oh hooray, you gave "Admins" which are you and everyone you selected, the ability to show the map, give gold/lumber, and give experience to heroes. What's the point of that?

The Following May Be Offensive (But still legit)

To get a sick kick out of being idolized so that you could give out rewards? Or to give yourself an unfair advantage?

Besides from those problems, tleno describes most of the flukes on the map with a couple sentences. I can agree with him.

Suggestion: Read up on tutorials and ask around for assistance. Everyone was new once.

No Rating and voted for Rejection.

 

[krisserz]

The map lacks well-written description and it lacks a type, what is enaugh reason at the moment for rejection.