Midnight dreary

[elredir]

this is my latest terrain...i took a little more than i expected to finish it...if i come to think about it its the terrain i worked the most on
its inspired by the concept art of tristram from diablo 3...

wanted to give it that dark,earrie feel...but it didnt came out really good...
any advice would help...especially on how can i make the sky look better...
Update:

update2

 

[fladdermasken]

That cathedral came out amazing, great work with the archways and brickwalls. The sky looks really cool actually, sort of cartoon-ish. The only thing bugging me is the choice of tiles really. Keep up the great work elredir!
EDIT: Christ, can't give you rep as I have to spread it around first.

 

[Pharaoh_]

That cathedral came out amazing, great work with the archways and brickwalls. The sky looks really cool actually, sort of cartoon-ish. The only thing bugging me is the choice of tiles really. Keep up the great work elredir!
EDIT: Christ, can't give you rep as I have to spread it around first.

This.

Good job, nonetheless! :]

 

[Oziris]

Looks good but I would delete that yellow grass/shrubs and add more tiles. Delete the water too. How did you make those clouds? Was it the "kill jaiden coming" (cant remember) doodad?

 

[OpGTekcoR]

The cathedral sort of reminds me of a darker version of Scarlet Monastery in Tirisfal Glades. Loved it.

 

[elredir]

thx for the encouragement guys...
ill change the tiles...but i dont really know what tileset fits this kind of terrain the best
@Oziris:the clouds arent that killjadaen storm or whatever its called
they are made out of a ton of glows,first i made the shape of the clouds out of black glows and then i added in front of them normal glows with low tinting

 

[Adiktuz]

wow! it looks so good! it can make a really good place for a cinematic...

 

[Dr. House]

...This reminds me of a terrain i made. Anyway it looks nice good job

 

[Oziris]

You have too much glow doodads on the ground. It shouldn't be so bright. I suggest deleting them and making the fog darker. Also you should tint those doodads down specially the graves, they look really bright.

 

[~Void~]

The sky looks really really weird.

 

[Celaquil]

Ah, it really made me happy to see that you posted a new terrain elredir. Well, the terrain isnt.. Really very good looking, there seem to be some things that hold this little thing aback. Let me point out what I personally think you should be doing about it. For starters, as I am sure have been pointed out more than once, the sky looks really wierd and "blurry" as a skinner would say (I think.) You might want to work a little more on that and make it look a little cleaner and neater. Also, personally I think there is a little too much color on display here, the green bushes and grass tiles/models doesnt entirely fit in, and should either be replaced or toned a little more grayer.

I also think the wooden parts of that cabin should be a little darker. There should also be another layer or two of mountains fading into the background, and possibly a little darker and more covering fog to make it more closed up. And thats about it for my part, hope my advice can be of some help.

 

[Belgarath]

i would use a less blurry sky and a less fluorescent moon

 

[supertoinkz]

The clouds looks shit. Thats all.

 

[Its Ryan Boi]

I think this is very nice 9/10 for good work put into it.

[-] I like how much time you must have put into this
[-] Looks playable to me (I love playable terrain that looks good or decent)
[-] Cannot find anything what I don't like about this.

Good job

 

[elredir]

updated the terrain...changed some stuff
i guess it looks a little better...really need some suggestions on how to make it looks better...cuz im all out of ideas

 

[Oziris]

It looks a lot better. But those graves are still bright and hurt my eyes. That tomb ( It too is bright) is miss placed. Why would a tomb be in the middle of the yard ? I suggest deleting that house on the left side. To make the road go on.

 

[elredir]

yeah i agree that the graves are too bright...ill tint em down and i forgot all about that tomb..gonna remove it,its really misplaced
im thinking if i delete the house on the left the terrain would look kinda empty...and i for one like it

 

[Gadric]

Personally, I'm still finding the sky a bit off. I'd say that you could go more cream with the moon and less cumulus with the clouds. Perhaps something closer to...

Props to whoever posted this on Internets (that wonderful series of tubes). It's a beautiful picture.

 

[elredir]

that picture looks amazing ..but i dont know if i can do a sky like that
anyways i have a problem...when you set the time to midnight every thing in the map gains a bluish color,does anybody know how to remove it...or is it even possible??

 

[noxwinslol]

imo the sky in the second version is fantastic.

 

[elredir]

updated terrain...

tag

 

[Oziris]

Looks great now, dark an scary! +rep

 

[fladdermasken]

So much better, excellent work.