Magician Staff

[Moderator]

17:45, 2nd Mar 2009
LiOneSS: make it an attachment and I'll approve.

12th Mar
Nice job, could be a bit smaller though. Approved.

 

[D a w n]

nice idea but:
1. the stone texture does not fit that much into the theme in my opinion. Search for a good wood or metal texture instead
2. remove the unused textures and materials
3. remove the unused global sequences
4. remove the geoset animations.
5. Improve the particle emitter and add a texture to it.

 

[Need_O2]

Really sloppy and shouldnt be approved
Suggestion: Stop spamming models section

 

[SirNathan]

Really sloppy and shouldnt be approved
Suggestion: Stop spamming models section

Dude...
Give new users a chance to improve their skill insted of telling them to give up

Updated!

 

[Need_O2]

oh sorry but I just get annoyed when I see sloppy works, thought its something like that
I can add nice looking particles for you to check how its done if you want

 

[SirNathan]

No thank you..
I have to learn it by myself and it doesn't bring me anything if you add particles..

 

[Need_O2]

okay, I just learn best with examining examples so I can see how they are done but its just me and you are not me

 

[SirNathan]

Oh yeah thats another way of learning ^^
But I think I first have to learn the basics of Particle thing to improve..

 

[Misha]

seems nice but... it is too plain =/

and make a pic where we can see how exactly it sits on a unit

~Misha~

 

[AIagremm]

It could be used as draenei lantern.

 

[Misha]

size is nice... well it's nice.

 

[SirNathan]

Thank you Misha =)

 

[Grendel]

Hmmm.....

Well, its not bad for a beginning model (don't worry, i actually don't have any claim on being able to say that because... well... i can't model.)
could be useful... um... sorry i cant post better but as said before, i have no experience in the matters.

 

[Champara Bros]

It is cool,I like it,You could add glow around it and add some particles or some kind of emitter.

 

[PhyberOptix]

Painful

Ow. Although you are a new user, the staff is clearly lacking in many areas. The staff and the crystal connect together to a very thin point. Although this may not matter when you view it in default view height, it's obvious in first person RPG's.

Well, keep trying I guess. You get a 3!

 

[SirNathan]

It is cool,I like it,You could add glow around it and add some particles or some kind of emitter.

Done
I hope you like i like this..
Give me suggestions if you dont like it this way...

Painful

Ow. Although you are a new user, the staff is clearly lacking in many areas. The staff and the crystal connect together to a very thin point. Although this may not matter when you view it in default view height, it's obvious in first person RPG's.

Well, keep trying I guess. You get a 3!

You'r a new user too?^^
You joined in November and did not get any +rep yet..
I cant remember any "first person" RPG..
The most use a "third person" view
I know that the staff is lacking..
I have to fix that soon...

 

[Avex]

You'r a new user too?^^

Pwned.

Ontopic:

Its very lacking though yes, needs particles. Keep learning 3/5

 

[SirNathan]

Its very lacking though yes, needs particles. Keep learning 3/5

The staff needs particles ?... What do you mean?

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Such as glow, and small things flying out or around.

 

[SirNathan]

I already added the glow on the crystal... isn't that enough ?

 

[Champara Bros]

Done
I hope you like i like this..
Give me suggestions if you dont like it this way...

It is much better now,it looks like there is some magic in it
+rep

 

[Holygiant]

It's a very good model but lacks detail on the staff itself.

4/5

 

[Elenai]

its a little...awkward looking.

 

[ELxCaigi]

nice idea but:
1. the stone texture does not fit that much into the theme in my opinion. Search for a good wood or metal texture instead
2. remove the unused textures and materials
3. remove the unused global sequences
4. remove the geoset animations.
5. Improve the particle emitter and add a texture to it.

Its a mage staff there should be some sorta magic crystal...

 

[SirNathan]

Its a mage staff there should be some sorta magic crystal...

The "stone texture" he meant wasnt the crystal .. I had another stony looking texture for the staff..^^

 

[AIagremm]

You should remove the glow(Or make another model without it)

 

[SirNathan]

Why ?
Without Glow It looks too plain ..

 

[mast3r13orn]

Boy i love this thingy!

 

[Kankuro]

I put your model on my map. 5/5

 

[tyr574]

well this is kinda useful