just highlighting my comment:
Main concern of this game is not it's replayability but a total conversion. And it has been fulfilled. Don't expect a super addicting gameplay. You should also understand the fact that I'm working on this for no more than 2 days.
I hope your read this carefully
I think people will always say a bad things about other people's map (except for their friends). If you want a good gameplay, then maybe you should complaint it to all of template/terrain maps?
Have you even tried my Ring Out? I was focusing on it's gameplay, I made it very unique, innovative, and very different from any other wc3 maps. But when I do, people doesn't even mention any single "nice" word to the gameplay, they keep saying "the gameplay is too hard" or "this gameplay is a copy of Warlock" again and again. In fact I was totally not inspired from warlock, but from "Spongebob: Light, Camera, Pants" game. They did just like the gameplay is totally sucks.
Then about my flappy bird, my teacher said "my mind's blown with your coding skill on your flappy bird" when I showed him my in-game editor. Yes, I put soooo much effort on that editor. But only one person ever mention it on his review, he is Hell_Master. Just like the editor is totally nothing.
About my Ultimate Chat System, my only one perfect resource so far. When people can't mention one bad thing about it then they just shut their mouth. They don't even give me ratings for my achievement. But when I submitted "Bomfartment" which is not a very nice submission, then many people came to give me critism and ratings of 3/5. Why they do not do it for my UCS?
So what's your conclusion mate? The fault is on me? You will keep mocking me even if I improve my Love Runner's gameplay. This is exactly what makes me hate everybody on thw, not all people actually.
But don't worry, I will shut your mouth with my majestic creation: Magic Soul.
The main concern of any map is it's replayability if it is not a one-play game or/and a campaign. Congratulations on the conversion, but it is nothing worth worshipping over.
Please take a look at Illidan's works before saying yours is original or first. What we expect is a functional gameplay that makes the map fun more then a couple tries.
Working on a map for only 2 days? That doesn't even qualify past alpha which is even more evidence that it isn't 5/5.
Yeah read it perfectly.
I think people will always say bad things about any map to help you improve it or to troll you or to give u criticism and well if you can't take it then move back to EpicWar.
Is this map a template/terrain? It's protected so. . .
Yeah Ring Out is a fun and nice map however the contest hasnt been finished yet and the results are still being worked on as well yet again it is a very difficult and rather distracting game.
It is rare, it isn't unique. It could of been better. It wasn't that different. I am sure I mentioned it unless I don't count as people. The gameplay for a fact was too hard, it was a copy since yours and warlock are both 2D games and warlock was first. It's been a problem ever since the creation of idea's.
Sure you might have got inspiration elsewhere but whatever Battle.Net felt first is what is usually remebered first. I don't understand after the spongebob game quote.
Your teacher is likely not much of a programmer, yeah flappy bird was an impressive *mini-game* map however you worked really hard on it which makes it a 5/5. Not everyone is qualified to review, should accept opinions and reviews no matter what though because your quite lucky. You know why? Some people don't even get even close to as many reviews as you yet you brush us aside saying you hate us. Your turning into a bad mapmaker with great skill and talent with that attitude.
You yourself said this was a 2 days work which means it can't possibly be even 4/5. It's a modding site for a decade old game, the people that are capable of reviewing are busy working on stuff of their own. However so far I haven't seen one in-capable person so far on this map for reviewing.
Yet again you should appreciate it when people post even if it is a low mark. The only time to complain is when a comment like "LOLOLOL 1/5" arises.
Your UCS is your only perfect resource? It's been done over and over again, I still prefer ToadCop's over yours. I wish you would of did it in vanilla JASS or GUI.
You want people to shut their mouths and no longer even comment on your works? Your contradicting yourself and being a hypocrite.
It sure was a funny spell and had a good name, people were nice enough to offer critism and ratings, they don't do it for your UCS for several reasons.
A few reasons would be it's already perfectly coded or it is too difficult to use or it's just not useful for some or its in vjass.
Yes the fault is on you, you intentionally insult people after reviewing your stuff, why would anyone want to do anything for you after that?
Nobody is mocking you, improve your game if you want better reviews and comments. Just by saying that is extremely offensive. It's simple either say thank you or don't post anything at all or ask them to re-consider after letting them know what the main goal was.
I don't even want to give you my review now however I will still because it's my duty as a hive reviewer.
Please smarten up though, your talented and very impressive however do you really need everyone telling you that 24/7? You create fun and great stuff however it sometimes just isn't unique/original and sometimes it just isn't fun and just a good look. Sometimes it just requires a bit balancing and listening to the community on what you should do instead of trying to insult us.
Hope this gives you something to think about. Your not the best, nobody is. There is always someone better at something. Everyone's different, if you hate bad reviews/marks then request it again after either improving your work or asking them to review it based on the main goal.
Edit: If my post is offensive then I apologize however he needs to see it this way because the other ways are either too plain or nice or mean.
Terrain 5/10 ;
It features a nice change and conversion however the background is simply too bright.
There really isn't much there, just a straight line with black blocks coming at you.
Triggers -/10 ;
Would help improve/replace terrain mark however map is protected/corrupted.
Gameplay 10/20 ;
It's original and done well. It could use work though.
My suggestions are to add more then just jumping like maybe jumping from something to something or ducking blocks.
Fun Value 5/10 ;
This includes replay value as well. This gets boring very fast and even more so from the blinding terrain. I suggest doing the opposite of what you already have meaning black background and white blocks and characters.
It is lacking in terms of something to do, there's been many click-war genre maps and this seems to be moving into that. Adding multiplayer would definately improve this map epicly.
Visuals 10/10 ;
A total conversion done right.
Final Mark = 30/50 - Voting for approval
3/5 | The mark is divided by 10 in order to fit into hive's rating system. |