(2)Lost wasteland

[Nudl9]

If this is your first map it's pretty good.

Good use of tiles and there's enough variation.
Doodad placement fits well.
I think you can restrict wind effect to less commonly used areas, so it's not used everywhere.
Unlike light rain effect, wind is more obnoxious to look at over time.
The minimap is very clean and readable, the roads in particular help make the minimap easy to read.
The layout feels original and memorable.
Areas are open where they need to be and with a few chokes here and there.

The rest of the feedback is in the paintover picture.

 

[WolfFarkas]

to insert a screen

1) go to the screen view of the page: here

2) right click on the screen and copy or copy to clip board.

3) go to edit your thread and paste the screen where you like., you can insert the screens that you uploaded when you uploaded the map.

hint: be very very carefull with outland creeps because they are very broken for 1v1,as example almost all they dont sleep,, so test them and consider put some orges or dark trolls.

6 orange creeps feels, few, perhaps change 1 green in center to orange and add 1 orange more,

10 orange would be more nice,5 per player

 

[Zucth]

to insert a screen

hint: be very very carefull with outland creeps because they are very broken for 1v1,as example almost all they dont sleep,, so test them and consider put some orges or dark trolls.

One more thing I will added here about outland creep. All of them never sleep even draenai. I didn't look into the map, but see from your picture check that GobM. make sure to put a creep that sleep in the night time there. Outland creep isn't that bad though. They are better than felwood and Asvenhale creep.

 

[KoD.ZOmbIE]

Do you think its good if I replace outland creep with lordaeron creep or some other? How will it look like?
Upload a new version. Please test and give feedback. I think its not a final version.

 

[WolfFarkas]

Do you think its good if I replace outland creep with lordaeron creep or some other? How will it look like?
Upload a new version. Please test and give feedback. I think its not a final version.

there are orges in Nagrand, outland

 

[mafe]

Well, based on the judge reviews of the recent contest, it is clear that there is alot of work to be done to improve the map.

I have to add that gaps in forest should be avoided in particulat for 1v1 maps. The best (albeit non-obvious) way is to place trees exxlusively with the size 2 circulat tool, with single clicks, so that new trees align perfectly with existing trees with no gaps in between.

So until some of the issues from the reviews are addressed, the map goes to Awaiting update.

 

[mafe]

No update in a long time. Set to useful/simple (formerly known as "stubstandard).