Lightning Attempt!

[Archipelago]

Well, found a great inspiration photo and tried to make it. Tell me what you think about it.

Since I'm not very good at lightning I have to practice Don't I?

Though I'm kinda disapointed about the forground. Seems empty, but I don't know what to do with it, suggestions?

 

[thedeathunterxx]

the background is pretty nice.

but you might want to :

make those mountains further in the backgroud, or extend your camera view so that it can look a bit more epic sky, right now it seems like a strange Bog covering nearby hills.

I suppose if thats what you were after, you dont have to change it, but if you want a cool lighted sky, make those hills into mountains ( just move tha camera out a bit )