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Sclammerz's Review
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MAP NAME: Kingdom of Elves MAP AUTHOR: DwarfBoy Version: 1.0 |
INTRODUCTION:
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Hello. I did play your campaign cause' I like campaigns. But Im disappointed when I did'nt catch up with the storyline or even finish this, and I guess this is a beta version, I suppose. |
TERRAIN:
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Your terrain is very very empty and really needs alot of work. You should put alot of effort in this part. It is very plain and does'nt have any decorations/sky and etc. This really puts down the campaign. |
SCORE:1/5 |
GAMEPLAY:
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A warcraft-ish gameplay and nothing wrong with it but they were BUGS, I encountered and it really affects the whole chapter. I'll show it later. |
SCORE:2/5 |
STORY:
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I did'nt really catch up with the story because of those BUGS, Anyway your cinematics have some problems, the dialogues are really fast and the cinematics ends fast too. So, I can't really read them all and catch up with the storyline. I've also notice some spelling and grammar mistakes too. |
SCORE:3/5 |
BUGS:
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In chapter one, the dialogues are repeating. Like this: ![]() In chapter two, You can train the 4 heroes unlimitedly. Here: ![]() In the Interlude, the cinematic did not end, then I opened your Campaign at the world editor and found out you forgot the victory trigger. I have no image this time
In Chapter three when those cave elves will unleash those demons the cinematic did not end once again. It stays like this and just wasting my time. ![]() I have thoughts that I will stop playing it but I really like to know the story but then. In Chapter Four: This happened again ![]() ![]() Then I stopped playing it. Did you test your campaign, I'm sure if you tested it you could noticed these bugs too. |
SUGGESTIONS:
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Make your terrain alive by placing decorations, some tile sets, sky. Add some other variety of custom spells for the main heroes. Shasha have skills but she don't regenerate mana, mind to fix that? Quel'Dar druid has 3 complete spells but he is only Initiate mastery level. You don't have Game Cache, My hero always start up again at level 1. In Chapter 2, my hero can level up to 10. In Chapter 2 loading screen it says "The Vasion" while in the map it is "The Trolls". Mind to fix that? Add some usable dropped items cause' No items can be obtained in some chapters. (Actually all of them). Fix the High Elven Farm's tooltip it says "Tooltip Missing". Your elven techtree needs alot of work. When you train Quel'Dar Druids it says train Priest. You could fix that. Troll Shadow Priestess is spelled as Preistess. Fix that too. Ballista's Icon is still Glaive Thrower. Fix some of your tooltips too. Fix the icon of the Iron Raven, it is using the Archer's icon. Why not used the default warden icon? Think about it? Please improve your thread, add screenshots, important details about your campaign and etc. Also there are some unclose tags, Fix them please. |
OVERALL:
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I think it's needs alot of work and in its current state I think it cannot be approve by a moderator. Those bugsz fix it and maybe I'll play it again and maybe can raise my given score. |
2/5 - NEEDS FIX I vote for Needs Fix. |
Nice Words
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You did finished this campaign in just in just few weeks, I think this is not the best it could get, if you did not hurriedly uploaded it. A great map will take time, you could make this better. Anyway have a good day and Happy Mapping! |
ELVES? ELVES??
Man, you just hit me, I'll check this out!
@Mechanical Man: Hmm, I don't think that it's a good thing to compare campaigns...
General :
QWER should be the hotkeys for Hero Spells
Are those some new standards?
And it feels like its a must that to have QWER hotkeys for hero spells.Should