Jungle Forest

[Moderator]

20:55, 26th Jun 2014
Hell_Master: I would like to quote eubz's review on this one:

1. Terrain is just too plain with no tileset variations. Learn to use some variations on tilesets. Also, use height variations in the terrain.
2. Doodads are placed randomly while many parts of the map left empty.
3. Some goldmine are placed too close to each other. You can try just a single goldmine with high golds in it.
4. You just have the very default melee triggers having added this trigger line

• Player - Turn Gives bounty On for (Random player from (Load 5 of 5000 in (Last created hashtable)))

which makes the game boring. I think you can start creating melee maps to enhance your ability in terrain manipulation and correct placements of units, doodads, etc. Afterwards, you can start learning how to trigger a map. I started creating maps with melees.
5. Map Title is Mikes Forest map sucsess 1.1. Why not change it to Jungle Forest.
6. Make the map a multi-player map if possible.

Regards and happy mapping.

And to add, I suggest that you create a thread on Map Development regarding this map of yours. You could post updates there about your map until it gets finished and post the map here.

For now, I must reject this.

 

[Spartenmike116]

The map works and is a two or 3 player map. i was just scruing a round but the 3 player is a nutral thar you can save to be on team. thear are custom mercanari huts and random portal cercals and sumoning surcles. custom merc hut has each race worker class unit and red player hass an advantage. but this is only my first map that i have publist. if any thing needs fixing just mesage me.

 

[IcemanBo]

You should improve your description and add screenshots:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...w-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/

 

[WaerercraftKillers]

yes this needs REJCTION in it.

 

[IcemanBo]

yes this needs REJCTION in it.

I think you should try to be more constructive.

 

[Vinz]

Please edit the description in the Scenario.

 

[Shadow Fury]

Doesn't seem a promising map as the description says nothing about the map and there are no screenshots. Also, the name of the map is "Just another Warcraft III map" and that means you didn't change the name of the map from Scenario ---> Map Description ---> Name:
Fix those things to avoid a certain rejection

 

[Spartenmike116]

sorry

 

[Spartenmike116]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/images_all/smilies/contest_smilies/goblin_boom.gif

You should improve your description and add screenshots:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...w-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/

 

[Vinz]

Don't take it as if we're mad, most of us are trying to help. Most.

Anyways, the new title is pretty obscene.

 

[Spartenmike116]

Im 16

 

[Binsu]

I would suggest improving the descriptions, please do use the given links to you for constructing a good description. Do remove the foul language in the description for they are really unnecessary and in some way might be offensive. I would be waiting out for the updated version, good luck!

@WaerercraftKillers
Do have some manners of criticizing someone please, I don't even know if you are heeding my warnings or let's say "tips" because warning sounds like I'm threatening you or something BUT please, I will say it again, have some manners on criticizing and do add "Vote for" in your "Rejection" part, I explained why.

 

[eubz]

1. Terrain is just too plain with no tileset variations. Learn to use some variations on tilesets. Also, use height variations in the terrain.
2. Doodads are placed randomly while many parts of the map left empty.
3. Some goldmine are placed too close to each other. You can try just a single goldmine with high golds in it.
4. You just have the very default melee triggers having added this trigger line

• Player - Turn Gives bounty On for (Random player from (Load 5 of 5000 in (Last created hashtable)))

which makes the game boring. I think you can start creating melee maps to enhance your ability in terrain manipulation and correct placements of units, doodads, etc. Afterwards, you can start learning how to trigger a map. I started creating maps with melees.
5. Map Title is Mikes Forest map sucsess 1.1. Why not change it to Jungle Forest.
6. Make the map a multi-player map if possible.

Regards and happy mapping.

 

[chilla_killa]

What the hell is this? Does this map make any sense? There is no goal, just tons of unit spammed randomly. No triggers, ridiculous terrain, faulty tooltips.

Seriously, you need at least a concept or an idea / story behind your map. This is just random nonsense. I can't understand why you upload this.

 

[JCarrill0]

What the hell is this? Does this map make any sense? There is no goal, just tons of unit spammed randomly. No triggers, ridiculous terrain, faulty tooltips.

Seriously, you need at least a concept or an idea / story behind your map. This is just random nonsense. I can't understand why you upload this.

Little harsh don't ya think?

 

[Vinz]

It's his first map, did you really have to be that harsh?