Those eyes...
Lower the brow to a natural hieght level. Also, give the brow a natural curve, ive never met anyone with perfectly cesent eyebrows.
The eye makeup needs to be blended into the ret of the face better, it stands out to much and give the appearance she got the shit knocked out of her.
Anyways, i lik the body, the cloth, the runes, very nice.
Aside frm the eyes, pretty nice skin.