Isolated River.

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12:21, 17th May 2013
Orcnet: Hera's review:

-Terrain is just messy. It looks like you just randomly dotted the map with doodads making it look like trash. Try making it more natural and stuf..
-There's some parts where the hills are unnecessarily high. like the Goblin Merchants part making it.. er... not good to look at.
-Not much strategic areas. There's not much ways to move through so limiting it's strategic stuff.. X3
-Behind some starting points, trees are sort of thin. Players can catapult their way in for an ambush while in some starting areas, they cannot.
-The "easy" creep camp is too far from the base. The next gold mine is even closer to it. Try making a small creep camp for the player to level up with.
-What's with the fog? it doesn't fit with this scene.
-At the bottom right starting point, there's a little brave kobold there. You should remove that or its free exp for the player there.
-I think the creeps guarding the gold mine is too weak. But that's more of a personal view there..

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[GreeN!X]

-Terrain is just messy. It looks like you just randomly dotted the map with doodads making it look like trash. Try making it more natural and stuf..
-There's some parts where the hills are unnecessarily high. like the Goblin Merchants part making it.. er... not good to look at.
-Not much strategic areas. There's not much ways to move through so limiting it's strategic stuff.. X3
-Behind some starting points, trees are sort of thin. Players can catapult their way in for an ambush while in some starting areas, they cannot.
-The "easy" creep camp is too far from the base. The next gold mine is even closer to it. Try making a small creep camp for the player to level up with.
-What's with the fog? it doesn't fit with this scene.
-At the bottom right starting point, there's a little brave kobold there. You should remove that or its free exp for the player there.
-I think the creeps guarding the gold mine is too weak. But that's more of a personal view there..

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[Orcnet]

please fix your creep camp's facing value in one direction some of the camps looks messy (e.g your green camp of gnolls, mercenary camps, goblin merchant)

 

[BLazeKraze]

At last, this is my first accepted melee map...

 

[BLazeKraze]

hahahaha