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Icecrown Forest

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A creepy, haunted forest, lives of many ended in this cursed forest, their destiny is to serve forever, to the scourge...

Just a little piece of the terrain of my upcoming rpg, this actually, is Haunted Woods, one of the first areas to hunting...

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Hope you liked it, its my first post on terraining...please comment!
 
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Interesting.Not bad at all,but i really think you should use the UTM.It can make your terrains look 10 times better.

The units,well,i feel like theyre in the way.Remove them.If you put them there to fill a void in the terrain,add more doodads.
 
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A few points:
-go over your tiling and change the path tile, maybe add some variation.
-Remove the units (Leave them if you want, but they really have no purpose)
-Replace the columns with something more suitable, they don't look they match the tileset, they seem a little foresty.
-And finally smooth the ground around the stream, it looks a little pointy.

i really think you should use the UTM.It can make your terrains look 10 times better.

I wouldn't suggest using the UTM for playable maps seeing as it would increase the file size greatly.
 
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Looking pretty good. I would add more plant life though. Tinted river rushes are always nice. Scale them down a tad, and make the variation 3 instead of 4. Or use custom models from the UTM.
 

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You made a pretty good job for a terrain that was not made from the UTM.
However, there are a few things to mention:
  • There are a few places that need tile variation;
  • The road needs to be bigger, the rough dirt of Icecrown makes it look like it's oil.

There is little else you can do if you're aiming for realism. I rate it 7/10.
 
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Although necroposting is not allowed, I'll let this slide, giving comments on peoples work is different than other threads.
 
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