Human Campaign (Visible)

[Moderator]

21:05, 5th Jul 2014
Orcnet:

Ok... I'm sorry to say that, but this is really bad.
You didn't make a good job on your terrains, they're too weird, you should use a better tiles variation. At Chapter 1, I could control Antonidas and the Footman, and I could simply avoid that undead tower. At Chapter 2, I don't need of keys to open the gates, I simply destroyed them and run away. At Chapter 3, I gone to these two villages and that's also weird, why those humans were giants?! and Northrends (that little part) you mixed Village and Northrend doodads, that's too odd. At Chapter 4, we have to collect 6k of lumber, ok so far, but it's too weird to see the Undead being spawned instead of trained. At Chapter 5, I destroyed the Undead base (I didn't liked of that joke ) using only the heroes. At Chapter 6, well, this chapter is kinda of nice, but the first dialog's voices belongs to the 'A Request For Help' interlude. At Chapter 7, there's only Thrall and a Raider at the Orc's base, why?
The Interludes are too weird too, the first one, 'The Dawn of Chaos', the Undead are Gods? only 2 undeads/demons heroes at each Human and Orc bases destroyed them. In 'A Request For Help', the Raider disappeared, he is there and then, *PUFF*, he's not there anymore. At 'Retreat RETREAT!', I don't quite understand what happened, they are in Northrends running away from the Undead, and then they are in Dalaran... WTF?
Also, you used the Frostsabre map (Blizzard made) for ALL the Northrends' missions, you not even removed the neutral creeps.
This took me around 30 minutes to finish it.
Anyway, I'll give you 2/5, however you need to fix it.

 

[Cokemonkey11]

Maybe you have some screenshots or a youtube clip?

 

[Uchiha Sasuke.]

Maybe you have some screenshots or a youtube clip?

I'm new to Hiveworkshop, so I don't know how to upload screenshots of this campaign.

 

[LunarWolf]

I give you ten for the effort and because you had voice overs. But honestly after playing around with it I have to say that I honestly don't really enjoy this. The way the camera acts in cinematics , and so many more. In the first mission I had control of that footman and Antonidas. If you can go and read the tutorials on the site and as well watch some tutorials on youtube I am sure you will be able to rework this into something worth playing. But for now I can't stand it , maybe tomorrow when I will play all the missions I will give you a more well created opinion.

 

[Uchiha Sasuke.]

I give you ten for the effort and because you had voice overs. But honestly after playing around with it I have to say that I honestly don't really enjoy this. The way the camera acts in cinematics , and so many more. In the first mission I had control of that footman and Antonidas. If you can go and read the tutorials on the site and as well watch some tutorials on youtube I am sure you will be able to rework this into something worth playing. But for now I can't stand it , maybe tomorrow when I will play all the missions I will give you a more well created opinion.

Sorry to disappoint you. I know the camera movements are quite bad, but this was my first campaign ever. I've been working on creating campaigns for 6-8 months now and this one was created quite a while back. I've also made a new campaign which a sequel to this one. If you could bear playing this, I think you'll find the next one more interesting. I'll upload it soon. It's name is "Undead Campaign".

Thanks for your honest feedback though.

 

[Go'el]

very short review

Ok... I'm sorry to say that, but this is really bad.
You didn't make a good job on your terrains, they're too weird, you should use a better tiles variation. At Chapter 1, I could control Antonidas and the Footman, and I could simply avoid that undead tower. At Chapter 2, I don't need of keys to open the gates, I simply destroyed them and run away. At Chapter 3, I gone to these two villages and that's also weird, why those humans were giants?! and Northrends (that little part) you mixed Village and Northrend doodads, that's too odd. At Chapter 4, we have to collect 6k of lumber, ok so far, but it's too weird to see the Undead being spawned instead of trained. At Chapter 5, I destroyed the Undead base (I didn't liked of that joke ) using only the heroes. At Chapter 6, well, this chapter is kinda of nice, but the first dialog's voices belongs to the 'A Request For Help' interlude. At Chapter 7, there's only Thrall and a Raider at the Orc's base, why?
The Interludes are too weird too, the first one, 'The Dawn of Chaos', the Undead are Gods? only 2 undeads/demons heroes at each Human and Orc bases destroyed them. In 'A Request For Help', the Raider disappeared, he is there and then, *PUFF*, he's not there anymore. At 'Retreat RETREAT!', I don't quite understand what happened, they are in Northrends running away from the Undead, and then they are in Dalaran... WTF?
Also, you used the Frostsabre map (Blizzard made) for ALL the Northrends' missions, you not even removed the neutral creeps.
This took me around 30 minutes to finish it.
Anyway, I'll give you 2/5, however you need to fix it.

 

[Uchiha Sasuke.]

Ok... I'm sorry to say that, but this is really bad.
You didn't make a good job on your terrains, they're too weird, you should use a better tiles variation. At Chapter 1, I could control Antonidas and the Footman, and I could simply avoid that undead tower. At Chapter 2, I don't need of keys to open the gates, I simply destroyed them and run away. At Chapter 3, I gone to these two villages and that's also weird, why those humans were giants?! and Northrends (that little part) you mixed Village and Northrend doodads, that's too odd. At Chapter 4, we have to collect 6k of lumber, ok so far, but it's too weird to see the Undead being spawned instead of trained. At Chapter 5, I destroyed the Undead base (I didn't liked of that joke ) using only the heroes. At Chapter 6, well, this chapter is kinda of nice, but the first dialog's voices belongs to the 'A Request For Help' interlude. At Chapter 7, there's only Thrall and a Raider at the Orc's base, why?
The Interludes are too weird too, the first one, 'The Dawn of Chaos', the Undead are Gods? only 2 undeads/demons heroes at each Human and Orc bases destroyed them. In 'A Request For Help', the Raider disappeared, he is there and then, *PUFF*, he's not there anymore. At 'Retreat RETREAT!', I don't quite understand what happened, they are in Northrends running away from the Undead, and then they are in Dalaran... WTF?
Also, you used the Frostsabre map (Blizzard made) for ALL the Northrends' missions, you not even removed the neutral creeps.
This took me around 30 minutes to finish it.
Anyway, I'll give you 2/5, however you need to fix it.

Okay, I've realised this campaign is pretty bad; so sorry for disappointing you. BUT do try out my new campaign "Undead Campaign" which is a sequel of this campaign, coming soon. It's got voice overs and better gameplay. Though, it's not completed yet. Try it out and tell me if you like it. If I get a positive response from people on the Undead Campaign, I will make more of it and complete it.

 

[Go'el]

Okay, I've realised this campaign is pretty bad; so sorry for disappointing you. BUT do try out my new campaign "Undead Campaign" which is a sequel of this campaign, coming soon. It's got voice overs and better gameplay. Though, it's not completed yet. Try it out and tell me if you like it. If I get a positive response from people on the Undead Campaign, I will make more of it and complete it.

I will, good luck man, if you need any help just tell me

 

[Uchiha Sasuke.]

I will, good luck man, if you need any help just tell me

There's one thing I do need help in. I don't know how to make it so that you can skip a cinematic. If you could tell me a simple way of skipping cinematics, that would be helpful.

 

[Hardtime]

Why don't you try asking advice from retired campaign makers like OutsiderXE? I'm sure he'd be glad to train you in his 'Blizzard-level' way of making campaigns OR you could ask the current ones like my good buddy Forsaken who recently released Tides of War a few weeks ago.

 

[Go'el]

OR you could ask the current ones like my good buddy Forsaken who recently released Tides of War a few weeks ago.

Yeah, but Forsaken's campaign don't have skippable cinematics.
But anyway Sasuke, I used this tuturial to learn to skip cinematics. Good luck.
And your Undead Campaign, I'm downloading it now :3