[GUI]Phoenix Assault v7.1

[Moderator]

12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: Too long as NeedsFix. Rejected.

23:43, 18th Jan 2014
BPower:
Although there is nothing wrong in the code per se, it too simple in my mind. Spells should also have an innovative concept.
The ordered shockwaves create small permanent terrain deformation leaks in data, the problem has never been fixed by Blizzard.

Meanwhile you have far better resource in the spell section.

If you have any questions feel free to pm me.

 

[Maker]

The spell is ok in terms of being MUI and leakless. However it is quite simple and I am pretty sure there are similar spells already approved. Therefore the spell is not that useful and might face rejection.

 

[Chaosy]

This is a good start dude. Even tho this is simple for more exped users. One of the best spells I have seen from someone with 1 post

Gave it a 3/5

 

[Haley]

@Maker
ok, i'll try something different next time

@Chaosy
thx...

 

[Ofel]

REVIEW|Phoenix Assault|v7.0

Resource Status: Approved Rating: 3/5

GENERAL	None
PROS	MUI Leakless Simple
CONS	Similar (almost) with some approved spells Too simple
SUGGESTIONS	Add something that can cover the similarity and simplicity

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If you have any question about this review, PM or VM me Review template by Doomlord

 

[deathismyfriend]

Add last created unit into a temp unit variable and use the variable.
Anything used twice or more should be stored and the variable should be used.
It is a bit too simple but the pic looks interesting.

 

[Haley]

will fix asap...

 

[Maker]

Use only one dummy unit, like this

Phoenix Warrior Events Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability Conditions (Ability being cast) Equal to Phoenix Assault Actions Set PW_Caster = (Triggering unit) Set PW_Target = (Target unit of ability being cast) Set PW_Owner = (Triggering player) Set PW_Level = (Level of (Ability being cast) for PW_Caster) Set PW_TempLoc = (Position of PW_Caster) Set PW_TempLoc2 = (Position of PW_Target) Set PW_Angle = (Random angle) Unit - Create 1 Phoenix Spawner for PW_Owner at PW_TempLoc facing (PW_Angle + 180.00) degrees Unit - add dummy ability to the unit Unit - Set level of Spawn Phoenix for (Last created unit) to PW_Level Unit - Add a 1.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Last created unit) For each (Integer PW_Loop) from 1 to PW_PhoenixNumber[PW_Level], do (Actions) Loop - Actions Set PW_Angle = (PW_Angle + (360.00 / (Real(PW_PhoenixNumber[PW_Level])))) Set PW_TempLoc3 = (PW_TempLoc2 offset by PW_PhoenixSpawnOffset[PW_Level] towards PW_Angle degrees) Custom script: call SetUnitX(bj_lastCreatedUnit, GetLocationX(udg_PW_TempLoc3)) Custom script: call SetUnitY(bj_lastCreatedUnit, GetLocationY(udg_PW_TempLoc3)) Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Orc Tauren Chieftain - Shockwave PW_TempLoc2 Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_PW_TempLoc3) Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_PW_TempLoc) Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_PW_TempLoc2)

Set the dummy's Art - Anmation - Cast point and cast backswings to 0. Also set movement speed to 0. Add the ability with a trigger, not in object editor. You could use a variable for the ability.

 

[Haley]

i'll update this tomorrow... so sleepy... zzzzzz

 

[ILH]

wow nice ofel teached you? he's a good teacher

 

[Haley]

@ILH
yeah, some...
he's busy with his AI system...he mad if i ask something to him... ;_;

Edit
Updated...

 

[nhocklanhox6]

I think it's very cool if this spell target on the ground..