Grunt.blp

[Moderator]

14:25, 25th May 2009
Hawkwing: The bolts everywhere make it kind of strange. Decrease the amount of those that you have. Also, work on adding more contrast to the face.

 

[HFR]

I liked the concept and idea, but those braces with ropes doesn't fir the "robotic theme", also, you know that orcish technology isn't that modern. This looks like a rebot made by humans or gnomes.

And I noticed that the metal plates in the arms are strange, it should be more squarish like. If the wrapping doesn't let this being fixed, well, at least you tried

You finally entered in the world of the skins, and it's a nice one for being you first here. It's still has some flaws, but it's worth a 3/5

 

[War3_Editor]

Way too blurry, sharpen it, and add more color, because it is way too monotone
modify the wrists, too, cause it doesnt blend in with the rest of the skin. additionally, it looks like a bunch of plates just nailed on, which doesnt look like a robot. do something about the weapon, too, cause it doesnt fit with the robot.

 

[Zerox]

I liked the concept and idea, but those braces with ropes doesn't fir the "robotic theme", also, you know that orcish technology isn't that modern. This looks like a rebot made by humans or gnomes.

And I noticed that the metal plates in the arms are strange, it should be more squarish like. If the wrapping doesn't let this being fixed, well, at least you tried

You finally entered in the world of the skins, and it's a nice one for being you first here. It's still has some flaws, but it's worth a 3/5

Well its supposed to be future orcs that make it. And its actually not my first one sadly. My first which I and even serveral other users liked was rejected for being "too messy". T.T

That was my first skin submitted here.

 

[HFR]

Honestly, this one is better than the robot... Well, it's messy, but, who doesn't stays messy after an battle against knights?

 

[Zerox]

Well yeah that was the whole point of it. It was supposed to be more realistic. XD

Alright I made this skin because I thought the normal Orc Grunt was a little to clean/not as beat up as he should be. After all when the heck was the last time you saw them try to clean themselves up? All they do is fight and since its a war they should be really dirty and have blood on them from their enemies am I right?

Anyway made by me(Zerox). Give me credits only if you want to be nice but it isn't required. Tell me what you think and be sure to rate me.

Note: Skin is saved at maximum quality. To reduce file size just open in Wc3 Viewer and convert it to .tga and then back to .blp with lower quality.

Hope you like it.

N. Zerox

But like I said Hawking rejected it for being too messy. XD When that was the whole point.

Unacceptable
15:51, 6th Sep 2008
Hawkwing:
[Rejected]
It's just a big mess.

Also thanks for the suggestions War3 Editor. Its appreciated.

 

[HFR]

Well, at least this is of enough quality for being approved, it just needs a bit more of polishment.

 

[Misha]

wery good Zerox but you should do the same detailing and nuts'n'bolts on the face too.

and his eyes aren't so showy ingame =/

Rating: 3.57/5 Nice

~Misha~

 

[matmat01]

- stitch on the legs are straight ---, stitch on the arms is like this ~~~
- blurry... blurry... doesn't fit well on the wrap.

 

[Leeroy]

1)Sharpen.
2)Less bluryness.
3) ?
4)Profit.

 

[GrandApothecary]

Sarpen it a little buddy
I like it though *does the robot*

 

[Sabelion]

Nice, but you could remove the eyebrows . And change the weapon to a little more futuristic look, like steel. And continue his arm there instead of the bracelet so that the black line continues on even to hes hand. Where it might stop, I dont know .

Good work anyways.

 

[Misha]

well zerox, the bracelets would need to be metal too with some green lights or maybe a kind of a green display. also he needs more green lights on his body <3

 

[GAniksdal]

Maybe you can fix that blurryness on the upper-arm and the face, would make it better.
But it's a good idea

 

[Hawkwing]

But like I said Hawking rejected it for being too messy. XD When that was the whole point.

There's a difference between mud-splattered and "wtf?" messy.

Also, you spelt my name wrong in the quote.

 

[Sabelion]

There's a difference between mud-splattered and "wtf?" messy.

Also, you spelt my name wrong in the quote.

Lol, instant reject for spelling Hawkwings name wrong .

 

[Hawkwing]

Lol, instant reject for spelling Hawkwings name wrong .

Haha.