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I can see you're using pretty much the exact same elements as in the contest. Slightly dull, but still good picture - make one for summertime with a proper cliff (the bottom not filled in with white smoke), and it'll be better, I'd think.
Another idea would be to extend the cliff and then have the picture cut out with the bridge. Would look better, I think. Maybe have small glacier "islands" within.