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Gilneas arena v.122AB

Submitted by snowman990
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
Gilneas Arena
Welcome to Gilneas arena...Many Heroes battle here for glory...There's Team 1 and Team 2.Kill 60 enemy heroes to win!
How to win:
Kill 60 heroes
How to get gold:
Team 1:
send your team 1 units to team 2 portal
Team 2:
Send your team 2 units to team 1 portal
Kill your enemy heroes
income always come when team1/team2 units/Creeps spawned.
Heroes:
1.Paladin:Golden armor,Healing wave,Holy light,Golden wave,Light srom
2.Voodoo doll:VOODOO!,Voodoo protection,Voodoo trick,Critical strike,Voodoo spirits
3.Frost mage:Frost nova,Frost bolt,Frost armor,Brilliance aura,Frost attack
4.Bladeworgen:Mirror image,Spirit wolf,Battle roar,critical strike,Avatar
5.Worgen chieftain: Endurance aura,Shockwave,War stomp,bash,reincarnation
6.Naga death knight:Crushing wave,Summon water elemental,Serpent ward,Cleaving attack,Call guard
7.Forsaken assasin:Death coil,acid bomb,Shadow strike,Unholy aura,Reincarnation(lil'different from worgen chieftain reincarnation)
8.Lich:immobilize,bash,banish,hex,Petrify
9.Butcher girl:Impale,vampiric aura,critical strike,evasion,Raise dead
10.Skeleton:Wind walk,Howl of terror,Thunder clap,vampiric aura,terminator mode
11.Night elf archer:Multishot,trueshot aura,Thorns aura,Elvencraft,Poison arrows
12.Clown:Cupcake mine,evasion,Star aura,got doNUT?,Crazy Cupcakes

Screenshots
Heroes
[​IMG]Frost Mage
[​IMG]Paladin
[​IMG]Voodoo doll
[​IMG]Naga Death Knight
[​IMG]Worgen Chieftain
[​IMG]Left to Right: NE archer,Skeleton,Clown,Torturer,Holy Knight
[​IMG]Left to Right:Forsaken assasin,Lich,Butcher Girl,Succubus queen

Units
[​IMG]Team 1 units
[​IMG]Team 2 units

Map preview
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/195880-albums4506-picture44781.jpg

Credits

67Chromes,Vicboy(from warcraft 3 campaign),Ampharos_222,Darkdeathknight,Thrikodius,Gottfrei,Sellenisko,Fan,Pyritie,Pyramidhe@d,Mephestrial,MasterHaosis,Mc!,JetfangInferno,Donut3.5,Sunchips,WILL THE ALMIGHTY,Myself (error_Trigger),Phoenix-IV,And Kitabatake.

update

-Decrease the Voodoo doll Voodoo protection Duration into 30 seconds
-Make the Gnome weapon shop bigger and changed the name into Dwarven weapon shop
-Added some Items to Dwarven weapon shop
-Change the Footman model into Bandit to Decrease the filesize a bit.
-A minor change in here and there.

update 2
-Change the night elf archer sleep into multishot
-Change the Lich Death and Decay into Petrify

update 3
-Add more heroes
-Add more items,But trigger still leak -.-" i think i'm going to change it in the net ver if i can

NOTE: Sorry if it was still leaking i don't really understand about triggers -.-" someone had give me the link to a tutorial,but still i do't get it -.-" i've tried Leak check,but it doesn't want to opened -.-" in the next version i'll add more heroes and add more items and fix some triggers ( if i can)

Keywords:
voodoo,worgen,gilneas,doll,error,trigger
Contents

Gilneas arena v.122AB (Map)

Reviews
Moderator
17:09, 29th Aug 2011 -Kobas-: Status: Rejected
  1. 17:09, 29th Aug 2011
    -Kobas-:
    Status: Rejected
     
  2. Slead

    Slead

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    Edite: Nice map But The Playing area is tiny make it bigger and fix this little lag Oh and make the gnom weapon shop bigger it look like a mouse,XD thats all 3/5 ill give 5/5 when you fix this little lag and make the map bigger.Good Luck! o_O
     
  3. ksStr

    ksStr

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    Hi there! Maybe you wanna improve your descriptions a little bit ~
    It's not really bringing out enough informations
    Anyway, I won't be the only one who requires a better desc @@
    Downloading.................anyway...

    Yeah 'Review'!!
    Reviews
    -Wow, you used almost 90% of imported models @@
    -It took me like 3-5 minutes chasing and killing the AI -.- both 30 level with hp of 3k.....
    -Items: Your basic items are barely helping player heroes to kill each other (T.T)
     
  4. snowman990

    snowman990

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    yeah..i'm in hurry so i can't make a better description...
     
  5. aki15

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    -You can make screenshots in paint...
    -Please improve description...
    -Put the hero skills....
    -Terrain seems plain... :eekani:
     
  6. TheKurt009

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    don't tell me i made you hurry up in facebook! :)
     
  7. snowman990

    snowman990

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    Hmm...okay
    I'll improve it soon
    that's because i use cutom tile skin,and the tiles kill the originally blizzard tiles
    BTW,if you want to see credit,see your stygian harlot/Webspun zombie...
     
    Last edited: Feb 14, 2011
  8. -Peper-

    -Peper-

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    I'm gonna test this, after i reinstalling my 1.24e and fixing my SMART modem :)
    Oh and you should put credits on description.
     
  9. snowman990

    snowman990

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    ok,add it tomomorow morning...
     
  10. Aesthetics

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    This map has enough to not be completely rejected but doesn't have enough to be approved.

    Some things you can fix:
    • Trigger Memory Leaks
    • "Do Nothing" actions, they are the same as putting nothing there except they the slightest little more morsel of memory for your system to commence with "doing nothing"
     
  11. snowman990

    snowman990

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    thanks to tell me about that,going to edit it on monday and write the credits on monday too because my mom does'nt allow me to open my laptop :vw_sad:
    Btw,can you tell me where's the leaking triggers?
     
    Last edited: Feb 15, 2011
  12. light bolt30

    light bolt30

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    An easier way of taking screenshots and uploading is; print screen and paste into paint, then you could crop and edit bits then upload to an image hosting site or the Hive album then just post it in your description.
     
  13. snowman990

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    For screeenshots,i think i can add it on friday...(I HOPE) and i want to tell you all that you can play with AI in my map.
    Btw...I forgot to give credit to one user -.-"
    Here a last credit,the one who make the custom cliff and custom tiles :
    L_Lawliet
     
    Last edited: Feb 16, 2011
  14. light bolt30

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    Please merge your posts together Error trigger. Also please improve the description since no one will be bothered to read a wall of text; add colours, tables, hidden tags, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you.
     
  15. Magnet199

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    Map seems interesting gonna test,

    EDIT: sorry for late feedback, but here is what i got :)

    The bad stuff:
    - skeleton transform is no use 0_0 500 hp + for an epic fight is nothing :S
    - lich is no use, the death n decay no one can see it, including my self
    - clown, please i dont have any idea whats the ulti :S
    - some heroes with such un-balanced skills, for example, Night Elf Archer's Sleep -_-
    - there is a bug when you antimate dead, you bring your team's dead units and let them pass the portal you gain gold -_-
    - Worgon is weird if you ask me, his avatar is too big, even his summoned wolfs
    - the death coil, cant be used on the enemy creeps nor your team...
    - items useless :S
    - no repick system :(

    The Good Stuff:
    - new idea :D
    - good terrain :D
    - new custom spells :D
    - "-unstuck" system is not bad :)
    - balanced creep clash :)
    - hero models :O amazing
    - the audience :)
    - and all other stuff

    Suggestions:
    - more hero registration :)
    - useful items -_-
    - more shops (including recipe)
    - balance spells :D

    Great Map, keep it up
    Rate: 4/5
    Rep: 1+
    Vote: -

    Good Job, work on it more so it can be perfect :D
     
    Last edited: Mar 1, 2011
  16. snowman990

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    changed.Now when you transform you get 1000 hp bonus
    I change the death and decay into Petrify
    The Ulti is same like voodoo doll ulti.If you don't like it,maybe you can give me an ability suggestion?
    Change the Night elf archer sleep ability into multishot
    Oh,i didn't realize that -.-" i'll try to change it on version 1.22b
    So,should i have to decrease his scaling value?
    well if you're on team 1 you can't use death coil to team 2 creeps because they're undeads.
    I need an Item suggestion
    I'm still a noob on trigger,but i'll try to make it on version 1.22b
    I will try on the next version if i can [​IMG]
    i need an item suggestion
    okay,i'll make it on the next version
    I will balance some hero abilities on the next version [​IMG]
     
  17. Adiktuz

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    for the death coil, trigger it don't use the default one...

    for items, maybe try to make a thread on the idea factory?
     
  18. snowman990

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    sigh -.- ... okay i'll try on the next version
    Hmmm...okay
     
  19. Midnighters

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    Reviewed by Midnighters
    Triggers/Scripts
    Your triggers need work. A lot of them leak, there are location leaks, and some of them could be easily condensed.

    Object Editor Work
    Most of the heroes are original Wc3 heroes, with newly named spells, and the spells have the same affect as the original. My friend who I tested it with, used Paladin, and said that the spells for it are far to regular, and do not seem changed, as well as the heals are a bit rigged.

    The Immobilize spell is broken, and causes the opponent to be stuck in one place for ever. The lich's spells have the same hotkeys, you need to make the hotkeys something like "QWERT", that way they are easier to reach on the keyboard.

    Terrain
    Now, onto the subject of terrain. The terrain is poorly made, you spammed doodads around the edges, and doodads in the arena, to try and make it more interesting, but it took your eye off the game, and made you think, "What was the maker trying to accomplish here?"

    Gameplay
    The gameplay was a bit boring, because you and the opponents heroes spawned in the same spot. The units at the bottom did nothing, and you gained level 30 instantly, which makes it no fun. The heroes need a lot of work, and the hero pick system allows more than one hero per player, which needs fixed as well.

    Final Judgment
    Overall, I give the map a rating of 1.0, Vote for Rejection