Forest Terrain

[Gladin]

Three screens of a forest terrain I made. Please tell me if there is anything I need to get better at.
First terrain I've posted.

 

[Celaquil]

You need to become better at uploading pictures...

 

[Nudl9]

Make them png, jpg or gif, not tga or bmp.

 

[Gilles]

When you hit PrintScreen just paste it into Paint and crop it. Then save as jpg.

 

[Gladin]

Feedback, anyone ...?

 

[Oziris]

Well to much doodads spam that is all for now cant see much.

 

[Gladin]

OK, but you gotta see something ...

 

[~Void~]

I see shrubs. And the end of the map in the first screenshot, maybe you should cover it up with more shrubs

No but really, there are too many shrubs

 

[Belgarath]

It looks good, because there are so many shrubs. Nice, overgrown forest feel.

 

[Gladin]

And the end of the map in the first screenshot, maybe you should cover it up with more shrubs

Not funny -.- Anyways, I'll try not to spam doodads next time. Thanks for the replies!

 

[Celaquil]

I agree on the fact that there is too much shrubs. Still, in my opinion, those are too plane, not inventive at all. My tip, well; Allways think: "What can i do that has not been done before?" thats about all, good luck further on.

 

[Tawsix]

Ugh, it's haphazard and... I dunno, it looks thrown together. Try some height variation or something... And as stated above, waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many shrubs. You can't even see the terrain below the shrubs. It looks like a damn zerg rush. But with shrubs. Also, try messing with the fog settings, add some dungeon fog, spice up the atmosphere.

Very raw at this stage. Has potential, but veeeeeeeeeeery raw.

 

[Gladin]

Ugh, it's haphazard and... I dunno, it looks thrown together. Try some height variation or something... And as stated above, waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many shrubs. You can't even see the terrain below the shrubs. It looks like a damn zerg rush. But with shrubs. Also, try messing with the fog settings, add some dungeon fog, spice up the atmosphere.

Very raw at this stage. Has potential, but veeeeeeeeeeery raw.

Excuse me, haphazard?

 

[Tawsix]

Excuse me, haphazard?

Seeing as it's your first, you're excused.

It looks like you spammed a bunch of doodads all around the place without any thought. That isn't terrain, that's being lazy.

 

[Gladin]

No, I mean, what the hell is haphazard?

 

[Volvox]

Google it. If nothing sane comes out, pretend that you didn't hear it.