Footmen DESTINY v1.00

[Moderator]

20:32, 27th Feb 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Use EpicWar for low quality maps like this. Rejected with a 1/5 rating.

You can find my full review Here.

 

[nukeman123]

please note that this map is SINGLE PLAYER

 

[bounty hunter2]

Here is my rating and comment:

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on object editor work
1 - 10 points go on scripting
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay*/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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->That equals 80 points max.
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+ Cinematic
1 - 10 points on camera work
1 - 10 points on dialog
1 - 10 points on music and or voice acting
- Cinematic
Object editor work
* Not in cinematic
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That equals 100 points max.
To get a Hive grade over 1/5 at least 50% of the 80 (Triggered map) or of the 100 (Cinematic map) points is needed. That means at least 40 or 50 points. However if a map gets rated over 1/5 by me, that doesn't mean that I will imidietly vote it to be approved.

Originality: 2 points
A footman going around killing creeps how original is that?

Object editor work: 2 points
Nothing.

Scripting: 1 point
Anyone who has 1% knowledge in WE could trigger that.

Terrain: 2 points
It was boring and too plain.

Bug Free: 8 points
It is bug free and should work.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 1 point
How can someone have any fun playing this? You have a footman and go around killing creeps?

Lag: 8 points
No lag, fine loading time.

Proper submission and crediting: 2 points
You must add info here and pictures.

In overall: 26 / 80
32% minimal 50% not met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall it is a map that isn't a map. It is a map that can be done by anyone with any knowledge and you must go a long way to see anything like this approved. I will suggest you some of the numeros things you must improve/add:

- Story
- Terrain
- Make a actual hero
- Scripting
- Gameplay

Good Luck in improving, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

 

[nukeman123]

fine then i already have a new one but it's called different it's called ultimate rpg ok? AND IM A KID!!!!!!!!!
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=114664&prev=d=list&r=20&c=107&t=55
that is the address for the new one ok?

 

[bounty hunter2]

I have wrote you my reply at your new so called "RPG". The fact you are kid doesn't justify you in making maps that are bad, it does in a way, but it won't help you getting them approved.