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Fog Horror v2.5

Submitted by mckill2009
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
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The town of Berg is a very remote place and it’s known for its very cold weather. Suddenly, all communications
from this place vanished.
The military headquarters 100 miles from away from Berg has sent you, an elite ranger
to find out what happen.

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Survive waves of attacking zombies and optionally repair nearby defenses to keep zombies out.
Solve the mystery of this town until your ally comes.

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v2.5
- Fixed a bug that game does not start
- Attack is now instant target instead of point target
- Hero is now a normal unit, so leveling is removed
- Difficulty settings removed
- Skippable cinematics added
- Items for heroes drops reduced

v2.4
- Systems and Spells improved.
- Camera lock removed
- Skippable cinematics removed to focus on the story.
- Difficulty modes added
- Hotkeys fixed and more easy to use
- Added adrenaline item

v 2.3
- Cinematics option to skip or not.
- Barricade changed to item instead of add ability.
- Quests messages created.
- Boost ability removed.
- Combat knife is now a default ability.
- Camera System fixed.
- Attack and Combat knife attacks fast.

v 2.2
- New multiplayer mode, 4 players maximum.
- New AI option if you play with computer as your ally.
- New Camera system.
- New Item item merger system which removes the item storage.
- New item drop system, removes tomes bacause it leaks.
- New cinematics and quests changes.
- A total of 8 new spells added.


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Models:
US Ranger by qassamzed
GLA Rebel by qassamzed
UTN Grenadier by Cavman
Chaos Terminator by Pyramidhe@d
M-8 Helicopter by Kofi_Banan
T-72 Tank by Kofi_Banan
Grenade by Illidan(Evil)X
T-80 Tank by Illidan(Evil)X
Cobra Helicopter by Illidan(Evil)X
Apache Helicopter by Illidan(Evil)X
GroundWalker_Minigun by jk2pach
Snowpine tree by Gottfrei
FirstAid By Em!
MEDKIT by ZEEP
PotionHealingSmall By epsilon

Icons:
BTNM249 by zombie2279
BTNammo by AlienArsonist
BTNammodump by zombie2279
BTNCombatknife by oh_snap
BTNGrenadeF1 by ANdROnIQ
BTNGunFire by NFWar
BTNreload by zombie2279
BTNMedikit By -JonNny
BTNAdrenalin By -JonNny

Music boss theme:
Duke Nukem Theme by Megadeth

Programs used:
Button Manager v1.8.2 by Shadow Daemon (for icons)

Systems:
Bribe, Magtheridon96, Jesus4Lyf, Vexorian, Spinnaker

Spells:
ElectricCharge by Hanky
Contents

Fog Horror v2.5 (Map)

Reviews
Moderator
11:21, 25th Jun 2011 -Kobas-: Status: Approved Comment 19:13, 27th Sep 2010 ap0calypse: unlocked. 22:06, 20th Aug 2010 ap0calypse: Rejected
  1. 11:21, 25th Jun 2011
    -Kobas-:
    Status: Approved
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    19:13, 27th Sep 2010
    ap0calypse: unlocked.

    22:06, 20th Aug 2010
    ap0calypse: Rejected
     
  2. Crave.

    Crave.

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    Can you replace the "Sh!t" in the cinematic with something else?
     
  3. light bolt30

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    Is this your map? Also the description is too short, please expand it. From those screenshots the FPS camera looks really bad. Here's a list of BB Codes if you need them.
     
  4. x3GlikE

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    Hmm...
    Testing it tonight :D
    Tell you how your maps going...
     
  5. mckill2009

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    perhaps you could set an example on how to FPS?, coz i did my best to do it but the camera cannot follow the unit's height.
     
  6. mckill2009

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    lol!, yes i will in the next update. Tnx...
     
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    Don't double post, use edit button instead. Also just remove the FPS camera, for some maps FPS just wrecks it alot.
     
  8. mckill2009

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    Thank you for your advice, I'm gonna update it as soon as i get home. But i really want to do FPS since the theme of this is like Nazi Zombies. Camera wrecks if you only go to high or low ground, other than that it's OK.
     
  9. ap0calypse

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    The camera is very bad for this type of game, the story is too cliché, the systems are a bit outdated, the terrain is very plain and boring, the language isn't very polished.

    I'll set it to needs fix, but it need lots of fixes.
     
  10. mckill2009

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    I'm gonna heed most of your advice mr apocalypse like the camere thing

    but the site rules did not say that the terrain must be very good nor 'not' plain nor 'not' boring

    another thing, what do you mean by very polished language and systems are outdated?, i'm not really good in english like you guys

    thanks anyway :)
     
  11. ap0calypse

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    Well, I think it's pretty clear that a plain/boring terrain decreases the overall quality of the map, no?
    You didn't break a rule with such a terrain, you are just decreasing the quality of your map.

    Polished language:
    • "I" should be with a capital letter, always.
    • "Ammo and grenade is your weapon", this sentence just isn't right.
    • Very basic vocabulary ("Yes Kendal, we hear you, what's up?" for example, this could've been so much better).
    • Some grammatical mistakes (forgotten where, but it had something to do with the wrong tenses).
    • Sometimes wrong punctuation.

    Outdated systems:
    Simple attack = -1 ammo system, no ammo = stop.
    Grenade just damages a spot in front of you.
    Multiboard contains basic icons (which you should've hidden).
    For the rest, there really aren't any systems worth mentioning, the multiboard is very simple, the spawn is generic, the camera is basic.

    I honestly fear this map has leaks, but I am too lazy to deprotect it to check how you did the triggers.

    Misc:
    • Chopper flies very badly.
    • After your first zombie kill, a cutscene starts, which makes it impossible for you to destroy the explosive barrel to kill/damage the horde of zombies coming at you.
    • Missing DISBTN.
    • "Survive endless waves", you cannot survive something that never ends :D
    • Intro cinematic cannot be skipped, after playing it 2-3 times it becomes a horror.
     
  12. mckill2009

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    I respect your judgement, but I did my best in terraining, I listen to the advice of others that I should not make the land flat, I also put various doodads, but I am not as good as you guys.

    About polished language, I will try to do better, still I am not good in english so please don’t expect too much of my english.

    About outdated system, I will renew the weapon system and add a little more ability/weapon.

    In general, version 0.2 is out and there are more improvements, I posted it in the map development area so that people can review it.

    Yes you can, that’s what the theme is all about, Nazi Zombies of CoD and that’s why the description says ‘Survive until you die’ :)

    All in all, I thank you for your review but please don’t expect that I am very good in english nor I am very good in making maps. I’m just starting to improve.
     
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    Fog Horror v0.7 Review

    Fog Horror v0.7 is a Survival map made by mckill2009.

    I see Ap0 allready reviewed your map and gave you all the pointers you need. I just played this and I find it very bad, since Ap0 allready wrote almost everything, I will be short:

    o Very bad terrain, plain, you should seek help, since you need good terrain for a map of this type.

    o Missing (green) icons. The DISBTNs are missing.

    o Uninteresting story.

    o Uninteresting shooting system.

    I dunno, if you worked on your terrain a lot, added more options to the game, improved the story a bit, perhaps this could have a chance for a 2/5.
     
  14. mckill2009

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    well, I'm just a rookie in terrain making. I seek help in forums. Anyway, I didnt make any violation of the rules, Apo made the review in version 1 which has an unfinished storyline, if you go on to the game deeper, you'll understand what's behind the story

    EDIT

    Version 1.12
    - Floating text has been improved

    For full changelogs, see description.
     
    Last edited: Sep 28, 2010
  15. Crave.

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    Honestly I though this was a different map until I saw my comment. Im going to check it again, see hows it been.
     
  16. JGGDMakervb6

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    You can ask help from other people for the map's terrain
    The minimap image is good but the game terrain and other stuffs!
    "Don't judge the book by it's cover"
     
  17. LoneLySteven

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    mayb nice ... try it today ...
     
  18. mckill2009

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    Version 1.13
    - Terrain has been improved, like trees, rocks, mountains
    - Fixed cannot see the ally units clearly because of fog during cinematic in the last scenes
     
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    ok i played it and it was quite good but theat grinding quest is realy boring ... i think it would be better if you could create baricades evrywere in town not only at enterances