Feralas, Overgrown Wilds

[Hawkwing]

Dalaran Shaft

Update: I made a new terrain. It is not even close to done, I need to add much more details to the walls. The "elevator" is generally done but the rest of the room needs some work. I used this type of lighting to make the the shaft look longer and the elevator higher up, ascending into the light.

 

[~Void~]

My negative review:

I don't really like the models you used for trees. They are mangrove trees which grow in swamps and well... this isn't a swamp. Plus they use WC3 textures which are, well, crap!

Also, there are too many rocks, not enough ferns, flowers, grasses and plants (NOT shrubs!), and a bit of tile variation down at the bottom would be nice. The vines tile isn't really great, and neither is the Ashenvale rock or lumpy grass to be honest... you should use more dirt.

Oh, and one more thing, when you place rocks (at least I like to do this) you should lower them so the ugly 2D textures at the base don't show, they are so ugly :\
4/5.

 

[Hawkwing]

Well I can't really change the trees but the rest of that can be changed. I agree with the Rock Texture, I hate it so much but that's just how I feel about a lot of Blizzard's models.

 

[Just_Spectating]

the Barren Spires are melting my eyes into a puddle of failure..

 

[~Void~]

Oh I didn't see those... yeah they're ugly... you know if you want to use spires use the Sunken Ruins or Ashenvale ones, they are at least green :\

 

[Hawkwing]

Thanks for the input. You don't notice all of these flaws until you've posted it. =P

I knew it was bad but thats why you post WIP's.

Anyways, I updated my first post. There is a new terrain but it is in major WIP. I plan to add a sky outside the barred walls and tint them a different color.

 

[Gilles]

That's pretty cool, but kind of plain.

 

[Master334]

I am seeing the wrong picture? I don't see any trees or rocks.....

 

[lord_Turin]

HALO 1 ftw.
always tked my mate in those lifts xD

looks kinda plain though.

 

[~Void~]

It looks like what I was going for when I made the ascent thing. You should put the fog as black and so that you can't see the bottom!

 

[Hawkwing]

Yeah, I saw your ascent thing and it reminded me of them Halo elevators. So I decided to make a "Dalaran Shaft."

The fog is black but I can increase the fog if needed.