Female_GunNinja

[Moderator]

21:26, 7th Dec 2012
-Grendel: much better now. approved!

 

[Bboy Moose]

her head looks weird, looks like she's high or something

 

[~DARK~]

Hand is Meh...

 

[~DARK~]

her head looks weird, looks like she's high or something

Agree With Him His Is Like A Goose

 

[Bboy Moose]

Hand is Meh...

her hand is somewhat okay, the weird thing is how her body and face looks.


edit: i guess you shouldn't double post:O

 

[icewolf055]

Thanks for you guys feedbacks

Anyway,

her hand is somewhat okay, the weird thing is how her body and face looks.


edit: i guess you shouldn't double post:O

What you mean she's high? Its fine for me

Btw, can you point out how its weird?

 

[Uncle Fester]

It's SHOWDOWN TIME! lol, she definitly needs a few corrections/fixes

 

[icewolf055]

Yep, i will try my best, but have no idea what to do, i mean, what to fix :|

 

[JesusHipster]

Well, her animations lack some more frames, her mesh lacks some more polys and alittle better shape, but overhaul i like it. It's realy good for a first model

 

[icewolf055]

^ Thanks

 

[DelmarVladek]

Good Model. It has uniqueness. Yes, I do agree, needs more "shaping". lol.
Perhaps you can make on just like it using Warcraft Textures, and blood mages animations. Would look better, and would move better too.

 

[Nolko]

I think that her face is weird because of her nose and because we can't see the whole head, try to base her face on an existing model like a banshee or something to see what's wrong with it, I also think that her body is like geometrical and don't looks enough smooth, in fact he looks like an adition of triangles you definitely need to improve this but this is a cool concept and I think you can learn many things in modelling through this model !

 

[icewolf055]

@DelmarVladek, Nolko Thanks, i will take you guys advices.

Btw, Update, fixed her head, reedit her body abit and teamglow on her hand.

 

[eubz]

There are some black in-game textures that you can use. Why not use them?

 

[icewolf055]

^ well, maybe i dont know them ( And i also dont know if they have some bright-places in that texture so my model wont look like a black thingy )

 

[Wolf_Wing]

Its weard
and the neck head body need to fix

 

[icewolf055]

^ Thanks, already fixed lot of things, and i should also add Talking Portrait too

Update:
Fixed her neck
Improved some lack frames
Added Portrait Talk

 

[DarkZerotor]

the guns look weird. can you make the it more round?

 

[icewolf055]

Well, actually, i got it from RifleMan model, maybe i will make another one (Just maybe)

 

[Bboy Moose]

This new one owns for a first model imo.

 

[eubz]

Can you put a hole at the end of those guns?

 

[Uncle Fester]

Can you put a hole at the end of those guns?

yeah, that's a rly good idea

 

[icewolf055]

Okay i will try but i think we cant see that hole ingame at all

 

[Uncle Fester]

Okay i will try but i think we cant see that hole ingame at all

it certainly can be....just like in this case

 

[RakEnRoL]

Looks good. Looking forward for your next model. Always be more creative

 

[Solu9]

A fine model now. Though can you make it so the guns point straight? Right now at least the one of them is angled a bit.

Edit: The left gun.

Edit2: After playing around with it, it's actually a pretty awesome model. 4/5.

 

[Almia]

Her gun looks weird,like a box just taped w/ a handle
No Offense

 

[Khil]

Honestly 3049 polies for this kind of quality is just a waste! And it's true that's some of ingame textures can do better than your custom one!

 

[icewolf055]

Update:
Fixed her height, now she's short abit.
Fixed her weapon, now more detail

 

[SlayabThoR]

It's a quite ok edition but I think it looks like the arms are inside her shoulders and so on.
You could possible make the textures sharper so it's easier to see which part of her body is what.

 

[eubz]

What happened to her during death animation? There is no decay or even dissipate animation of her. I like some of the animations, though. The model is too high poly. I think you can reduce them by welding some vertices together.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Really creative model, performs well in-game. 5/5

 

[Gamegear]

Animations <3

nice Spell animation.. looks like She tries to Curve the bullet Lol

 

[Zzonehardy]

Female. Gun. Ninja. ...

Do tell, where this idea came from? Quite original I must say.