FallenOneByrysnt11

[Moderator]

12:30, 10th Aug 2011
Frankster:

Well, this model edit is pretty bad.
The wrap of the main body is just gross and has lots of rough edged on the sides and on the top.
The head is very bad, it is small in size has a very bad wrapping and is not properly connected to the rest of the body.
The weapon and shield does not match the rest of the colour scheme.
Furthermore this model does not have a proper Death Bone animation. The body just sticks in the air - that is wrong.

Also, it is very flamboyant and egoistic to write in such big font. I mean seriously.

Also, do not multi-upload your model after this rejection. If you want it approved, fix it,send me a message and I reopen the thread. As easy as that.

DonDustin: the model seems fine to me now, but you should still improve the wrap of the head, it is still quite lacking

 

[Maximum_Evil]

Looks kinda blurry/rough but when updated this model could be very usefull

 

[SlayabThoR]

I liked this model 3.5/5 I vote to agree this model, but it's true, it would need a bone death animation.

 

[rysnt11]

updated!!
fixed the decay bone, remake totally a new body
here's some comparison
Fallen one (GIF)

 

[Ilike]

Useful for Diablo maps 4/5.

 

[Xian]

unacceptable???
this could be atleast 2/5

 

[Misha]

it does not look very well

 

[Xian]

only thing i doesnt look well to me is the "shield" that looks like a plank

 

[rysnt11]

compare the model with the reference pic

 

[RiotZ]

Is it just me, or did Frankster's evaluation of this sound really shitty, almost as if he is specifically going after Rynst11, I think it looks fine, the wrap could use a little work, along with the head, but other than that it's good.

 

[Silverfish423]

I agree with xRiotZx. His evaluations was quite bad and the model is not as bad as its made out to be. Just a few minor fixes along with the death animation

 

[-Grendel]

the wrap of the head could use some love. the eyes wrap around the side of his head. Also, the horns could use some texture too. you can use the lich skin for the horns. you can also try tinting his body to be redder to match the original Diablo fallen one.
that'll be all ^_^
3/5

 

[wowcraft]

Is it just me, or did Frankster's evaluation of this sound really shitty, almost as if he is specifically going after Rynst11, I think it looks fine, the wrap could use a little work, along with the head, but other than that it's good.

^^ i agree with you on this.. i have seen ALOT worse on this site and this is unacceptable??

 

[rysnt11]

@ampharos: i'll fix the head, the horn's texture will be undead air barge's , thanks for the suggestions, i'll consider that

 

[Misha]

meh.. i see more details in that pixel unit than in the model.... there are a lot of things that could be changed here; firstly; he is generally thinner, he actually has a belt, he wears a tribal loincloth/kilt thing, it has dark bracers on arms and legs, and does not wear shoes, his bludgeon actually has two rows of spikes around it, 4 spikes each and actually not that sharp, and his shield looks like it's made with uneven and rough peaces of wood, and not with perfect two-by-fours. and shoulderpad.. it could be smaller and.. softer material? or actually removed..

so yeah.. this could use a good rework.. and a little more taste..

 

[rysnt11]

@misha: well, in my opinion, the image show that he's wearing a fur like bracer, and for the legs, sorry about it, i'll make a new leg for him, the shield has got no other texture than the city structure

 

[-Grendel]

the kil'jaeden skin has some nice armor texture that you can use for the bracers

 

[rysnt11]

@ampharos: i'd prefer doom guard's, they have more details

 

[Warchief Aeon]

unacceptable???
this could be atleast 2/5

AGREED

WHERE THE HELL UNACEPTABLE!?!
This deserves AT LEAST 2/5 OR 3/5 LOL
I HAVE SEEN WORSE THING ON HERE THAT WAS UNACEPTABLE THAS HAS BEEN APPROVED LOL
AND TOUGH THE MODEL IS GOOD ENOUGH TO BE APPROVED AND QUITE USEFUL

 

[-Peper-]

The model could use some creativity instead focusing on a simple concept.
3/5 for now.

 

[-Grendel]

@ampharos: i'd prefer doom guard's, they have more details

the kil'jaeden armor has some darker tones than doomguard's gold armor. it would fit your concept very well in my opinion.

 

[Misha]

@misha: well, in my opinion, the image show that he's wearing a fur like bracer, and for the legs, sorry about it, i'll make a new leg for him, the shield has got no other texture than the city structure

lol

anyway, GL with tweaking :3 and change bludgeon and shield

 

[Mgeterno11]

I like that model! it is awesome and cool! I hope it will get approved. XD

 

[Warchief Aeon]

I like that model! it is awesome and cool! I hope it will get approved. XD

Maybe if someone can look at the model and see the good things on it instead of looking at a picture and saying that it sucks, we get it approved, tough is quite useful for Dungeon Stages... Im going to use it for one my melee maps as well...

 

[-Grendel]

accepting criticism is part of improvement. of course there are good things on a model but there will always be bad things.

 

[Lembidi]

yeah!! like this, my mean!! but, some add 2 sword or mace/mojo and 1 hammer on back!!
change the weapon into spear!!

 

[Xian]

yeah!! like this, my mean!! but, some add 2 sword or mace/mojo and 1 hammer on back!!
change the weapon into spear!!

dont you play diablo 2,hes basing it off that,fallen ones dont use spears

 

[rysnt11]

dont you play diablo 2,hes basing it off that,fallen ones dont use spears

i think he's never played it, just a random guy, dropped at hive

 

[JesusHipster]

He has no neck o'shi...

 

[DrakkarovCh]

its pretty acceptable to me now