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Faceless King

Submitted by MN Lahmar
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
Description
This is not a modification of the previous uploaded FacelessKing. I restarted from the bottom.
Like you all advised me before:
- He has chest and back armor.
- The helmet perfectly fits with no tubes or dark parts.
- The new creepy face made him look different than the other Faceless ones.
- His weapon is Unique from the others.
- He has a belly eye.
I hope this made him special enough. I hope this model gets approved now.


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Keywords:
Faceless, King, Warlord, Icecrown, Facelss One, Neutral, Creep, Boss
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Faceless King (Model)

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18:19, 16th Jan 2014 Misha: Create a little more unique armor for this guy, make sure it doesn't have holes in it like the 'crown', add a lot more details and 'extra appendages' like general vezax has, for example. Create a unique and sinister head,...
  1. 18:19, 16th Jan 2014
    Misha: Create a little more unique armor for this guy, make sure it doesn't have holes in it like the 'crown', add a lot more details and 'extra appendages' like general vezax has, for example. Create a unique and sinister head, and try some other weapon than a club.. he's supposed to be royal, right? think squid beaks, evil eyes, Yog-saron, or such..

    very good edit, now it does look like a commander-like faceless figure, and performs greta ingame
     
  2. CreatorD3292

    CreatorD3292

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    Nice ideal but... i don't think it's good enough. :3 try improve it a bit.
     
  3. MN Lahmar

    MN Lahmar

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    How :3 Please :3 explain :3
     
  4. kellym0

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    there re a lot of faceless void models, this ones nice and all, but the others have a higher more powerful look.

    to be a king, he should have more tentacles then any one else, should look scarier then any one else, and look more powerful then any one else.

    this one looks like all you really did was add a better weapon and some new nicer armor. compared to others like say these:

    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...8150/?prev=search=faceless%20void&d=list&r=20

    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...8386/?prev=search=faceless%20void&d=list&r=20

    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...0596/?prev=search=faceless%20void&d=list&r=20

    compared to the master mind especially, yours seems under tiered.

    your models nice and all, but not changed enough from the base faceless, try adding some more tentacles on his hands, maybe add a second weapon to his already weapon hand from another tentacle while he wields some form of scepter with cool emitters and ribbons. or something. this is a nice model, it just feels under completed.
     
  5. PlankingWolf

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    This.
    But, it's still pretty cool. It's basic, but it's enough for a simple map or campaign. So, you know, add some more things, and it'll be ship shape. (I suggest you add a crown that looks like a faceless one's, make him look scarier, and other stuff.)
     
  6. Misha

    Misha

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    i dunno.. there's something about that firelord armor that i don't really like.. Check General Vezax model here if you want inspiration
     
  7. MN Lahmar

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    I'm sorry, but i don't think those model are good as you described them. I will add some things to my model to made it better.
     
  8. Sin'dorei300

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    It doesn't look bad, but it looks 2 much like the original faceless one.
    Try to modify it more and add some cool stuff on him. ;)
     
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    Simple edits are not bad, if they are well done. I find the concept of this model interesting even if it's simple.

    Here are some technical flaws in the model:
    - some parts of the armor have inverted normals (you can see they are darker)
    - you have a lot of geosets and materials which could be merged

    And some personal opinion now:
    - "tubes" on the sides of the helmet look weird, maybe you should remove them
    - adding chest armor would be a good idea
    - weapon doesn't fit, get rid of this wood handle
     
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    we can call it cyclops
     
  12. -Grendel

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    how dare you call my models bad.
     
  13. MN Lahmar

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    Easy there. I didn't say they were bad, don't quote me wrong ok? :3
    You're a terrific modeler and i'm using many of your models in my next map.
     
  14. -Grendel

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    I'm just kidding too. You know, grendel being an asshole everyday.
     
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    There goes my sanity.

    Anyways, the model looks lovely in my opinion, he just seems a little... well, chubby. Or stumpy.
     
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    Awesome model! Great job, and God Bless!
     
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    Very nice. It has a few flaws, but nothing that'd be noticeable ingame.
     
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    Neat!

    Can I just say? I LOVE the little eye in the middle of his torso. Brilliant touch! I wasn't completely sold on this model I saw that. It's a pretty simple model, not outrageously different than the core one, but it's different enough to set itself apart in a significant way. The armor, the face, he's a blast to look at.

    I'm making a map where "Starspawns" are one of the enemies. I was just gonna General Verax, but I think this might be even better. Plus, lower filesize!

    4/5
     
  19. Kyrbi0

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    I didn't see the earlier version, but this is definitely lookin' like a more Heroic-Faceless. Lots of cool bits (love the eye-stomach). Much improvement.
    So Faceless.
    Very void.

    Wow.