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[Moderator]

08:58, 17th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
Terrain is really simple and empty. Item drops are bad as well.

 

[dragonis]

your on the right track cool effect with the obelisk and i like your idea but you must add more, update it, good luck

 

[Shimitar]

Here is Shimitar, reporting for another review.

Reviewed by Shimitar

Gameplay

The good news: There are some nice creep battles, and theres a fun tug-of-war battle fought over the center once the game kicks in. The bad news: That tug-of-war match gets really tiring, really quick. The empty, open space doesn't help either. How about a

3/5 (Mediocre).

Terrain

Aweful, just aweful. There is no variation in the terrain, and the occasional cool doodad does not make up for the bad terraining. Those large, empty, flat spaces hurt me physically. You could have done so much better...

1/5 (Dreadful).

Creativity

Your map isn't exactly creative. There are more 1vs1 single passage maps than there are Halo fanatics. However, I like the side passages by the water, and the goblin shipyards were a nice touch, so I'll give this a

2/5 (Poor).

Presentation

Your description is short but informative, and even I have to admit- those subtitles are cool. The giant screenshots take too much room, however, and should be hidden in a tag. Same goes for the credits. This seems pretty standart stuff.

3/5 (Mediocre).

Overall

I don't know. It has its fair share of problems, but they're easily fixable. Keep up the good work and don't be discouraged, because this map has potential.

2.5 (Lacking)
Recommended for rejection if the problems aren't fixed.

 

[Skycraft]

You may need to look at this tutorial to improve your game -> Polishing Your Game.
Trust me it will make it a lot nicer

And also, use hidden/spoiler tags for those images! They take up too much room.

 

[dragoon431]

Ok thanks guys and don't reject it yet i will try to fix problems

 

[dragoon431]

That tug-of-war match gets really tiring, really quick. The empty, open space doesn't help either. How about a

in your review you put how about a and i was wondering what how about a was?
Map was edited try it now.

 

[Slayer14]

Wow. This is strange, but I can't even play your map. When I click on your map in-game under "Single Player » Custom Game", my game locks up, completely and I am forced to close it using the Task Manager.

 

[dragoon431]

try it now it should be fixed and i know why. it happens to my computer too. i try to put in a preview image then i play it and it freezes. Bug fixed and map updated

 

[Slayer14]

I guess this map requires Patch 1.25 because I still can't play it. I guess that won't be a problem for most.

 

[dragoon431]

have you deleted the old map?

 

[Slayer14]

have you deleted the old map?

Well, the new one overwrote the old one, but I'm pretty sure that wouldn't make the slightest bit of difference.

At least my game isn't locking up now, it's just that I can't play it.

 

[dragoon431]

well I'm sorry i don't know what to tell you or whats happening.

 

[Slayer14]

well I'm sorry i don't know what to tell you or whats happening.

Like I said, the map probably requires Patch 1.25 for some reason, if you have it. I do not have that patch. That's what it looks like to me.

 

[dragoon431]

ohhhh yeah i go WE unlimited that might be what did it

 

[Orcnet]

hey! sorry for late response, will be checking this at Saturday and hopefully I can help you with your map and some reviews

 

[dragoon431]

thanks dude