Extended Lightning v1.0

[Moderator]

14:05, 3rd Apr 2009
Eccho:

A very great spell. The idea was pretty original, and the coding is well done. The documentation is good too. The same with the effects, it really fits the spell

Overall a very good job, but it is still not very complex. The tooltip, in my opinion could be smaller
(I also preferr the standard look of spells:
<description>
<Level 1:>
<Level x:>
but that is just me, so its minor)

I am gladly recommending this spell.

 

[calex3]

hey berzeker can you see this file plss nad can you tell me is it MUI...And that yours spell is nice(too good ) and is it MUI if it is i finaly understand how is MUI made.....you are perfect as allways +rep

 

[-Berz-]

Off-topic*
I guess it is MUI, because its instant cast spell

Oh, and thanks for the first comment calex ^^

 

[Rmx]

Review

Idea/Creativity : 9/10
Trigering/Scripting : 10/10
Balance : 9/10
Description/Originality : 9/10
Efficiency : 10/10
User Friendly : 10/10

Is Multi Instanceable : [YES !!!]

Final Rating : 57
Status : EPIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rating System
0 - 15 = SHIT
16 - 25 = Unacceptable
26 - 35 = Lacking
36 - 45 = Useful
46 - 55 = Recommended - Highly Recommended
56 - 60 = EPIC *Highly Recommended *

My View of the spell.
Great spell one of the best spells u did +REP OFC

How to improve : None just make more complicated MUI Spells plz

 

[Dark_Dragon]

wow amazing work out ther BZK!

spell is very usefull and well looking as always from u.

My Rating:
Coding: 9.7/10 -> well there is that bug that can happen with caster but i will ignore that
MUI: true +1 -> Spell is castable any amount of times at same time
GUI: true +1 -> Spell is GUI which means anyone can use it easy no jass knowlage needed
Leakless: true -> Spell does not leak (all leaks that GUI can fix are fixed) other then nulling globals but that is not so much important as leak gets away with next cast
Usefull: 10/10 -> In my option spell can be used in many maps idea is great
Documentation: 10/10 -> Any noob can install this spell in his map with a little knowlage of english
Edit Difficulty: 10/10 -> spell is fully editable just the way its supposed to be for this you get +5 extra points as many spells jass and GUI are not done so simple as you did
Performances: 10/10 -> Spells performances rock its fast meaning anyone can use it without having to worry about lagg
Effects: 10/10 -> I really think you used most best effects and it looks so good without any lagg
Readable: 10/10 -> The code is beautifull you used really some nice comments out there and divide parts of code just as they are supposed to be sooooo gj
Custom Script Objects: 10/10 This spell uses only one trigger meaning jass allocated memory objects through c++ code is taking as less memory as possible increasing your map's performances as well as map startup.

All in all this is GUI pawnage spell and i can recommend it for anyone who needs lightning spell in his/her map.

Great job again 5/5 and have a nice day!
I am out now
~Dark Dragon

 

[-Berz-]

Rmx, thanks for the comment =)

Meh, i don't bother with that advanced stuff...because i like spells to be simple

Edit:

Dark_Dragon, stop it, you're spoiling me

/me :shy:

 

[Rmx]

Well Berz i edited my last post chek it there is a review

 

[Squiggy]

Review

Well well, The first impression of mine was cool as I casted it.
Quite a good combination of effects but (just as an advice), edit the charm effects to a dummy and make it bigger - otherwise it's nice.
Walking to enemy units, I tried out the chainlightning - worked fine on all three levels.
Simply made but well done.
The tooltip looks also good and the effect's description is precise (maybe add the values just for the sake of it)

Loads of variables
Almost every line features a comment on it, as well as a handy readme.
As far as I can see, it's got no leaks and since it's instantly, the spell's also mui - but I'd also like to mention that you can stay awar from setting a variable by just using (Triggering Unit) instead of the variable.
That's it.

General: 3.5/5
Triggering: 4/5
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Total: 4/5

 

[-Berz-]

Oh, Squig, thanks for that comment =)

I was thinking of making that dummy as a charm model to, but i guess it would be to flashy.

About that triggering unit in variable, its better, because you don't need to search and scroll for that line, just poof click and its done

 

[Dynasti]

Spell Evaluation

Info

This review was done by Dynasti. If you got a question about this review then please leave me a visitor message

Rating This review is based on points, where 1 is the lowest and 5 the highest Subject Points Comment Triggering/Scripting Hidden Well done I must say, but it could have been more to it than an instant cast. Not saying that it is anything wrong with that, but it could have been more advanced. The triggering is flawless, not a singe leak. Good job Visual Effects Hidden Nice effects, some of them are old and not that creative but it looks damn nice! Documentation Hidden Extremly good documentation here. You are just getting better and better each time. Keep on the good job Idea Hidden Well the idea of an electric explosion with chain lightning spell is really old, but what the heck, this spell is executes very well! Maximum Points Your Points Rating 20 14 Recommended

Viewer's Note

Nice spell you got the -BerZekeR- , Leakless, flawless but it could have been more advanced. Well good job anyways +Rep and thumbs up for approval

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Well everyone was doing a review so I had to do my own. Mwohahahaha *cough! cough!*

 

[Kingz]

Great spell -BerZeKeR-!
I didn't see it due to the high amount of uploaded spell so i am sorry for not replying so soon...
Simple spell is simple, yet great^^
EDIT:
Looked at it now, it's great, useable and fun to spam.
Gets a 5/5 from me.

 

[-Berz-]

Uh, oh...

Thanks all, for such positive comments

Off-topic*

Calex, really next time make a thread about your questions or PM someone ^^

And it won't leak both ways you showed will work, without leaking, but i like the second way better since its easier to look at the triggering.

Edit:

Yay, approved, thanks Eccho for your review and approval

 

[lovelyangel]

Thank you for this spell. I learned many from this. ^^

But what does a leak do to the map? I'm a bit new to this things. Gome ne~ ^^

 

[-Berz-]

@lovelyangel, uh I'm glad someone found it useful 8')

Leaks are evil...well the best way to tell you they can crash your map.

So in a bit longer way, they are un-destroyed memory created by game, so more leaks you have more space they take and that space is limited, its like a balloon more air you breath in bigger it gets and eventually it will explode ^^

 

[lovelyangel]

My my that was a deep explanation with the balloon. But it all makes sense. ^^
Thanks you very much! I didn't know my map was leaking so hard. I'm glad I saw this info. ^^

Thanks again. I'm happy to see a friendly brother. ^^

 

[COMBO]

great spell ;D keep it up

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Awesome. Your spells are really great, this is just what i needed.