I've always been meaning to comment on this one.
Anyway, I love the concept and how each character is his own man. I was pleasantly surprised when I first read the dialogue that appears when someone dies. A bit troublesome, but still. It's cool and unique.
As far as execution goes, however, this map leaves a lot to be desired. The terrain sucks, the enemies are so damn plain, and there's not much in the way of items. I have a lot more to complain about, but I'm not writing them all down.
I love this map, but it's just really messy and unpolished. It would be awesome if you improve or even remake this when you get more experience with the editor.
Also, even though it's been three years...
First comment! Harharhar!