Draenei Hero Archer plus mounted version (AoW)

[Land Eater]

It looks great. Although the face appears to be bleak in some animations, it looks good overall and you won't notice it when you play. But what I would draw your attention to is the selection of her torso. Due to the fact that the belt seems to be a simple belt (without a central element), her clothes merge both from the top and from the bottom, which creates a bad perception. I would suggest adding a round badge in the middle of the belt. (I thought about whether her tabard would fit, but I think I would require unnecessary things from you) Another thing I would advise you to do is a cloak. It doesn't have to be long and wide like a night elf archer, but such a small detail in a cloak can do well. You can make the cloak on one side only, or not at all. I just think it would be a good idea, but maybe it just seems to me, and I'm wrong.

You guys are showing good results in this direction. I am always pleased with your work, and I hope you will delight us with them in the future. Hope to see these guys from behind as soon as possible. By the way about them. It seems their shoulders are not wide enough. And the shoulder pads are small. Because of this, the draenei, powerful in nature, look like withered dead. (although maybe this was the idea)

 

[Mr Ogre man]

I agree with @Land Eater, the trousers and the chest are way too similar and a badge in the middle of the belt would improve the model substantially (maybe something pink, similar to the bow?)

Also, something that would make the model twice as good is if the crystals of the bow had a global animation, where they moved slightly (especially those that are floating).

I'll mod it tomorrow, good job from what I've seen

 

[deme3s]

It looks great. Although the face appears to be bleak in some animations, it looks good overall and you won't notice it when you play. But what I would draw your attention to is the selection of her torso. Due to the fact that the belt seems to be a simple belt (without a central element), her clothes merge both from the top and from the bottom, which creates a bad perception. I would suggest adding a round badge in the middle of the belt. (I thought about whether her tabard would fit, but I think I would require unnecessary things from you) Another thing I would advise you to do is a cloak. It doesn't have to be long and wide like a night elf archer, but such a small detail in a cloak can do well. You can make the cloak on one side only, or not at all. I just think it would be a good idea, but maybe it just seems to me, and I'm wrong.

You guys are showing good results in this direction. I am always pleased with your work, and I hope you will delight us with them in the future. Hope to see these guys from behind as soon as possible. By the way about them. It seems their shoulders are not wide enough. And the shoulder pads are small. Because of this, the draenei, powerful in nature, look like withered dead. (although maybe this was the idea)

Thanks, I had a cloak in mind and a mini one to boot in although I feared that it was too much, but if you also think that it is needed then that means that my first thoughts on this model was to the point. As for the belt you are right and coming this week I will update her. As for the normal archers I will upload them soon, they only need a couple of tweaks.

I agree with @Land Eater, the trousers and the chest are way too similar and a badge in the middle of the belt would improve the model substantially (maybe something pink, similar to the bow)

Also, something that would make the model twice as good is if the crystals of the bow had a global animation, where they moved slightly (especially those that are floating).

I'll mod it tomorrow, good job from what I've seen

Thanks. I have some parts in mind for the belt which will fit with the bow too. I will also add animation to the crystals of the bow and diversify the lower part of the model a bit more.

 

[deme3s]

update 1:

-added motion to the crystals of the bow
-added buckle to the belt
-now the legs are a bit more diverse than the torso yet the scale armor is there so that it's not like it's a different set.


the cape is a bit tricky because the Attack animation takes the arrow from the place of the cape and it's a bit difficult to make at the moment. I may include one later on.

 

[Mr Ogre man]

update 1:

-added motion to the crystals of the bow
-added buckle to the belt
-now the legs are a bit more diverse than the torso yet the scale armor is there so that it's not like it's a different set.


the cape is a bit tricky because the Attack animation takes the arrow from the place of the cape and it's a bit difficult to make at the moment. I may include one later on.

you can add the motion of the crystals as global animations, as they only move in stand 1 and stand 2 (way easier than animating them in every single animation), currently, there are some animations where the bow is still.

The legs now look way better, good job

 

[deme3s]

you can add the motion of the crystals as global animations, as they only move in stand 1 and stand 2 (way easier than animating them in every single animation), currently, there are some animations where the bow is still.

The legs now look way better, good job

Thanks, the global sequence is good but it's easier for me to just add movements to some frames, currently stand 1, stand 2, and walk 1 have the movements of the crystals as they last a bit longer than the attack animation although if you think that it's better then i will also add the animation to to the rest of the animations.

 

[Mr Ogre man]

Thanks, the global sequence is good but it's easier for me to just add movements to some frames, currently stand 1, stand 2, and walk 1 have the movements of the crystals as they last a bit longer than the attack animation although if you think that it's better then i will also add the animation to to the rest of the animations.

Except on Decay animations, I think some movement would look nice in all anims, yeah. In the attack anim, you can make them stretch further or spin faster as well, since you are not going with the global sequence (I usually do single animations as well, they give the model more character.)

 

[deme3s]

update 2
-all of the animations have movements in the crystals of the bow now expect death and dissipate.

 

[Mr Ogre man]

update 2
-all of the animations have movements in the crystals of the bow now expect death and dissipate.

kay, let me check it in a moment

 

[polatgeyik]

good job

 

[Superfrycook]

Nice

 

[deme3s]

update 3
-added a mounted version
-added portrait for both versions, for the mounted version just rename Draenei_archer_hero_portrait to Draenei_archer_hero_mounted_portrait.

 

[Goffterdom]

Awesome new model for the Draenei roster, adds a lot of freshness to the usual Warcraft models.

Only thing that bother me a little is that her silhouette ingame is really "sharp", I don't really know how to say it better.

 

[deme3s]

Awesome new model for the Draenei roster, adds a lot of freshness to the usual Warcraft models.

Only thing that bother me a little is that her silhouette ingame is really "sharp", I don't really know how to say it better.

Thanks, although this model is obsolete. If I find time, I will replace it with this version.

 

[Goffterdom]

Thanks, although this model is obsolete. If I find time, I will replace it with this version.

Omg, looks so much better!

It completely cleans up the "sharp" issues I had with the model.