DesertOfBullets v1.20

[Moderator]

20:41, 28th Aug 2008
Septimus:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/797781-post6.html

 

[Septimus]

Look like a indiana jones game to me...

 

[Viikuna]

I believe its the hat. Only cool guys like Indy and Clint wear that kind of hats.

 

[Aeroblyctos]

One suggestion: Put those start locatations to corner of the map. Then picture looks nice!

 

[Huurka]

This got rejected before.

 

[Septimus]

This map had been examined by Alexis Septimus.
If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

However, if you still insist of another review after it had been review for second time. Feel free to contact other admin.

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1) Terrain - Bad (2)
2) Trigger -
3) Minor Error - Bad (2)
4) Major Error - Excellent (5)
5) Replay Value - Average (3)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Bad (2)
7) Use of imported material - Excellent (5)
8) Single player - Average (3)
9) AI support - Horrible (1)
10) Camera -
11) Originality - Excellent (5)
12) File Size - Good (4)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing -
15) Packaging - Average (3)
16) Credits - Horrible (1)
17) Storyline -
18) Theme - Excellent (5)
19) Protection - Horrible (1)
20) Quality - Good (4)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Average (3)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Average (3)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function - Horrible (1)
25) Unit Placement -

Total Accumulation Point : 53/90 * 100 + (-25) (Review) = 33.88

[+] -
[!] - Make more variety of game mode such as Team Deathmatch, Duel and etc etc...
[-] - Map protected and never mention.
[-] - Typo error found, you mistype "dollar" as "doller"
[-] - Uncredited resources
[-] - No proper instruction such as how to remove shitty pants buff.
[-] - Unit can jump off from a high canyon, what is this ? A terminator ?

Review : This map have violate 2 rules by not mention it is protected and have uncredited sources.

Also, I found out the game play is rather boring as I only able to find a dynamite item only. There is also no proper instruction telling user how to remove some buff such as shitty pants which slow down the unit movement or to get much better equipment.

And the desert lack of wild life such as scorpion and some place could be too plain. Add more variety of doodad/destructible such as bones of wild animal.

To my suprise, unit could jump off from the cliff without losing their life. As if they are terminator.

This map still lack of few function, if the author work much harder on it. I believe it would earn rating 5 someday.

Another -25 point for this map.

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

Score - 34/100
Rating - 2/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

The map might not be fully tested, if any user of the map found bug/error or anything else.
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[ShiroiSenji]

Epic fail once again just like potter.

 

[deepstrasz]

Just needs more stuff goin' on.