Death Knight Princess

[Snake Akuma]

She looks like a firework cart seller

P. S. Those shoulders are too large imo

 

[Ilya Alaric]

This model makes real life cataphracts(vis Byzantine warfare) look like naked

 

[StonemaulMidget]

A dead elven archer used as a trophy... Now that's charming.

 

[supermac0079]

good 4/5

 

[General Frank]

The concept is interesting, but the execution is quite the mess and looks very sloppily made and cobbled together. The particles are just way too much and on a technical side this model needs a lot of polishing and improvement.
Also, your full description needs to be in proper English.
Still, I applaud the attempt and you need to improve.

EDIT: Why is there a full-model portrait file? Can't you add that portrait animation and camera to the actual model?

 

[StonemaulMidget]

The concept is interesting, but the execution is quite the mess and looks very sloppily made and cobbled together. The particles are just way too much and on a technical side this model needs a lot of polishing and improvement.
Also, your full description needs to be in proper English.
Still, I applaud the attempt and you need to improve.

Why are you angry at me? "Charming" isn't even all that offensive.

 

[Perdoshlep]

Could you make no backpack version?

 

[General Frank]

Why are you angry at me? "Charming" isn't even all that offensive.

Pardon me, I was on a tablet and didn't want to interact with you or your comment at all.
My bad.

 

[deepstrasz]

I'm having a hard time seeing the princess.
Regardless, too heavy on FX which impedes proper gameplay especially in an RTS setting.
Also, please write the description in English as the rules dictate.

 

[DREADMAN]

Wtf...

 

[Resyak]

The model has too much "noise", sometimes less is more. I would drastically reduce the particles and the shoulder part looks very strange. It could be a good starting point for a good model but it still needs a lot of work.

Regards.

 

[BaiyuGalan]

Princess？ Okay, she looks cool. I like this one.

But you should improve the portrait.

 

[Greedy Martyrdom]

There were no knight to save her
So she became knight herself

 

[Carefree World]

Can you remove the sword behind the horse's butt? That looks too discordant.She already has one in her hand.

 

[Light Night Dark Star]

Can you remove the sword behind the horse's butt? That looks too discordant.She already has one in her hand.

Thank you for your suggestion, I will make changes to it. But I came in very busy and may need to wait for some time.

 

[stan0033]

These models needs a lot of optimizations - remove all unnecessary keyframes; deduplicate geoset animations; remove unused materials;

Review accepted by Footman16