Dead Land

[PrinceYaser]

Hey, guys!

This is an old work of me. Wanted to put it as one of terrains of my gallery. It maybe look simple coz it is old. Anyways, I hope you like it!

 

[sluk]

Yeah a bit simple with few doodads and the characters are too small
but i think it will look nice if you would edit it now

 

[fladdermasken]

You need to practice details with the height brush. Don't just use the larger brush sizes.

Read ~Void~'s tutorial on Natural Environments. Chapter 2 should help you a lot with height variation, but the entire tutorial is worth a read for environment details and tile variation.

Also, when the water takes up as much space it does here, you kind of need to add some details to it. It looks pretty shallow, so even details under the water surface should be visible.

You can add rocks, floating debris, shrubs, etc. Let some of it float atop the surface and lower some just beneath it so it gets tinted by the water colour.

The fog is done well though. It's a solid start, so keep building on this.

 

[PrinceYaser]

You need to practice details with the height brush. Don't just use the larger brush sizes.

Read ~Void~'s tutorial on Natural Environments. Chapter 2 should help you a lot with height variation, but the entire tutorial is worth a read for environment details and tile variation.

Also, when the water takes up as much space it does here, you kind of need to add some details to it. It looks pretty shallow, so even details under the water surface should be visible.

You can add rocks, floating debris, shrubs, etc. Let some of it float atop the surface and lower some just beneath it so it gets tinted by the water colour.

The fog is done well though. It's a solid start, so keep building on this.

Thanks, Fladder! But I don't want to work on this one. This is an old work and just wanted to put it on my gallery.

Anyways, thanks for the review. Please give me your reviews in my future terrains as well.

 

[Naze]

I know you don't want to update this, but next time you should pay attention to make things in the distance look smaller and more crowded. Otherwise they won't look like they're in the distance. Other than that, it is pretty much what fladder said.