Dark themed MUI spells

[Moderator]

12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: Too long time as NeedsFix. Rejected.

19:59, 16th Jun 2010
Hanky:
You got some leaks in your triggers. Fix them and I'll approve your spellpack.

 

[Septimus]

post this at script and trigger section to get feedback of where is the flaw instead of posting it at spells section. this section are reserve for complete work.

from what i see, you leak location and you use casting unit instead of triggering unit.

bah!! i let other ppl explain it further.. damn lazy

 

[xDsss]

Hmm at "hypnosis" the dead units are also included... just make a condition for living units becasue over the corpses there are numbers which counts down too.

 

[Thundragon]

Thnx for warnings, now I updated it. Septimus I don't know how to post it in triggers/script section, also I thought it would be the best section to post.

 

[Klingo]

Well... dark pillar can hurt allies unit.

 

[Dr. Boom]

Moin Moin =)

Ok I only got a small look on it and here are some points:

=== Forum - Description ===
Add you triggers into the map description of your map. [Use hidden tags for a better over view]

=== Spells ===
- Dark pillars: You should change it, that this ability damage yourself and friendly units

- Black Hole: Again retrigger it that black hole has no effect on own units.
- Black Hole: Also you should add an AOE casting circle ( Because Black Hole is an AOE spell )
- Black Hole: Somehow the spell interrupt before the 10 seconds are over, but I do no action or something else.

- Hypnosis: Wondering why my own controlled hero gets silenced if I use it on him =O

=== Trigger ===
- General: Don't use casting unit if your event is: Unit - A unit start the effect of an ability" - use "Triggering unit" instead.

- General: If you use the action "Unit Group - Pick every ....." you should check the conditions directly not after the picking. Because your way picks all units and after it checks the conditions from all units, it's better if you directly check it.

- Hypnosis: The 2nd action "Unit Group - Pick every [...] target point of ability being casted [...]" - you should first create a location variable with "target point of ability being casted" and clear this location at the end

- BlackHoleMoveTarget: There you got the following condition: "(((Picked unit) is A ground unit) Equal to (==) True) or (((Picked unit) is A flying unit) Equal to (==) True)" <-- sense of this? =O

+ works ingame
+ easy to understand [GUI + Good documentation]
+ Nice ideas
+ Good use with hashtables [I hate them at all^^]

* There are something you can change to make the spell better
* Some trigger improvements are possible and you should care about them
* Missed the triggers in the forum description [But there's no -point for it]

So what we have: Hmm I think about giving you and your spells 3,5/5 points. After you improve your triggers it will be 4,5/5 at all. Anyway you got my vote for an approval!

Greetings
The Bomb King ~ Dr. Boom

 

[Thundragon]

Moin Moin =)

Ok I only got a small look on it and here are some points:

=== Forum - Description ===
Add you triggers into the map description of your map. [Use hidden tags for a better over view]

=== Spells ===
- Dark pillars: You should change it, that this ability damage yourself and friendly units

- Black Hole: Again retrigger it that black hole has no effect on own units.
- Black Hole: Also you should add an AOE casting circle ( Because Black Hole is an AOE spell )
- Black Hole: Somehow the spell interrupt before the 10 seconds are over, but I do no action or something else.

- Hypnosis: Wondering why my own controlled hero gets silenced if I use it on him =O

=== Trigger ===
- General: Don't use casting unit if your event is: Unit - A unit start the effect of an ability" - use "Triggering unit" instead.

- General: If you use the action "Unit Group - Pick every ....." you should check the conditions directly not after the picking. Because your way picks all units and after it checks the conditions from all units, it's better if you directly check it.

- Hypnosis: The 2nd action "Unit Group - Pick every [...] target point of ability being casted [...]" - you should first create a location variable with "target point of ability being casted" and clear this location at the end

- BlackHoleMoveTarget: There you got the following condition: "(((Picked unit) is A ground unit) Equal to (==) True) or (((Picked unit) is A flying unit) Equal to (==) True)" <-- sense of this? =O

+ works ingame
+ easy to understand [GUI + Good documentation]
+ Nice ideas
+ Good use with hashtables [I hate them at all^^]

* There are something you can change to make the spell better
* Some trigger improvements are possible and you should care about them
* Missed the triggers in the forum description [But there's no -point for it]

So what we have: Hmm I think about giving you and your spells 3,5/5 points. After you improve your triggers it will be 4,5/5 at all. Anyway you got my vote for an approval!

Greetings
The Bomb King ~ Dr. Boom

-About dark pillars, I wanted the ability to damage friendly units becasue it's supposed it works as Rain of fire or Flame strike.
-For black hole the idea was to vacuum ALL the nearby units, but i think i'd be better if it doesn't affect the caster. And about that conditions I just forgot to fix that when i started making the spell .
.If you read Hypnosis description you saw that it says it silences all units in the area, so it includes the caster. I only though it would be more appropiate.
-I use conditions after the picking because i couldn't find a way to pick units in a variable group and search matching units at the same time.

I'll update the spell ASAP and fix any other bugs i find in my way

 

[Maximum_Evil]

Black Hole affects your own units to