Dark Breath v.2.0

[Moderator]

19:55, 19th Dec 2009
TriggerHappy:

Review for Spell

This spell could be made even without triggering. It's extremely simple and inefficient compared to an internal object editor spell. Sorry, but this can't be approved.

Status

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Rejected

 

[Axarion]

Post triggers/code here and give more Documentation

 

[Maker]

Trgger

• Dark breath init
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Dark Breath
  • Actions
    • -------- Here we set the caster --------
    • Set DBcaster = (Casting unit)
    • -------- Here we set where we shall spawn the dummy --------
    • Set DBTempPoint = (Position of DBcaster)
    • -------- Here we spawn and set the dummy a variable --------
    • Unit - Create 1 Dark breath dummy for Player 1 (Red) at DBTempPoint facing (Facing of DBcaster) degrees
    • Set DBdummy = (Last created unit)
    • -------- "Leak Remover" --------
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_DBTempPoint)
    • -------- Here we move the dummy and add a expiration timer to it --------
    • Set DBTempPoint = (Target point of ability being cast)
    • Unit - Order DBdummy to Move To DBTempPoint
    • Unit - Add a ((Distance between (Position of DBcaster) and DBTempPoint) / 400.00) second Generic expiration timer to DBdummy
    • -------- Special effects :) --------
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at DBTempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Undead\CarrionSwarm\CarrionSwarmDamage.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • -------- "Leak Remover" --------
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_DBTempPoint)
    • -------- DONE!! --------
    • -------- Change damage and range in the object, range in the "Dark Breath" skill and damage/aoe in the "AOE damage upon death DBDummy" --------

• Unit - Create 1 Dark breath dummy for Player 1 (Red) at ...

Create it for owner of casting unit.

• Unit - Add a ((Distance between (Position of DBcaster) and DBTempPoint) / 400.00) second Generic expiration timer to DBdummy

Here you cause a leak because you remove the caster position too early.

• Do nothing

You don't need to use this, ever.

You could work a bit on the tooltip, and you should tell what the spell is all about in your post.

 

[haxel96]

oh ;D forgot to change

 

[Kingz]

Add invulnerability to the dummy unit, else a thunderclap could kill it resulting in a bugable spell and exploitable one also.
EDIT:
Afaik AoE spells can't kill locust units but i may be wrong.

 

[haxel96]

Ok
ill fix all tips later,

 

[ACdestinydream]

lol
nice spell, but a little too... simple? how about adding more special effects? then if it is very flashy i will add it to my dark ranger's 3rd job skills ;D

 

[Frunck]

Way too simple, also if it's for an rpg maybe you should make damage scale with attributes?

 

[baassee]

Afaik AoE spells can't kill locust units but i may be wrong.

locust makes unit untargetable, invurnable and also can't be picked normally by triggers, refering to "pick every unit in bla", creating it and setting it into an variable is the only way to "command it"