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[Cupid] Writing Contest - Hive Love

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Goodbye David, it was nice knowing you. What do you want on your gravestone?
 
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I found you there, in the hell pit in the realm of Mad King's,
Wounded and scared, from a life filled with bad things,
With father gene prepared, I took you under dad's wings,
The others wouldn't stop stare, but I ignored their chat strings.
 
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Yup, my poem's about me and David <3
I found you there, in a hell pit in the realm of Mad King's,
Wounded and scared, from a horrible life filled with bad things,
With father gene prepared, I took your lovely skull under dad's wings,
The others wouldn't stop stare, but I kept on ignoring their mocking chat strings.

Ignited with true father love, Cupid's arrow had hit me hardly,
Mad King would be rather above, when I entered his evil party,
Pay-back for parenting with harsher stuff, teaching him to be hearty,
Making sure that Santa's team were masters of being awesome and arty.
 
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Why do I always choose the hardest words to rhyme with? I hope it is at least a little understandable - if not, feedback is very welcome. Might be final entry :)
I found you there, in a hell pit in the realm of Mad King's,
Wounded and scared, from a horrible life filled with bad things,
With father gene prepared, I took your lovely skull under dad's wings,
The others wouldn't stop stare, but I kept on ignoring their mocking chat strings.

Ignited with true father love, Cupid's arrow had hit me hardly,
Mad King would be rather above, when I entered his evil party,
Pay-back for parenting with harsher stuff, teaching him to be hearty,
Making sure that Santa's team were masters of being awesome and arty.

And soon your skeletal appearance was accepted by my friends,
With all of their skeptical interference gone, you became one who attends,
However I notice an bestial incoherence, and now might be where a father's bond ends,
Because you came to a sexual clearance, that you yourself was in love with Bernkastel and I comprehend.
 

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I've got my own little poem undergoing development but I will post as soon as I've got at least 4 stanzas. In the meantime, I'd like to ask kael if we can use characters that are inactive and to warn him that he brought it upon himself with the theme ;)
 
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Yay, some competition! What do you mean by characters that are inactive? :)

I used this entire morning to draw something to go along with my poem :)
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Here's my first WiP. Eat your heart out amaargard :D



Sitting there, in the moon's plain sight,
gazing at each other, holding hands tight.
The clouds are pierced by rays of blue light,
happiness echoed by love's might.

Staring into her eyes, ready his love to confess,
emotions surged Kael's body, giving him strength to progress.
"There are so many things I would like to express,
to you, my one and only, dearest LioOneSS."

"Your twinkling eyes, are like crystals crescent,
enchanting voice, like melodies evanescent,
shining hair, like moonlit water luminescent,
a heartfelt smile, like roses iridescent."
 

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There's plenty more where that came from. I'm bringing out the big guns.
 

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You think I don't know that? :D BUT whatever happens, I REGRET NOTHING!
 

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No, I don't think so. I just made it up.
 
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Considering how many girls there are in Hive, it's pretty hard to make up a heterosexual love story about anyone.

Wait. I just realised I'm hanging out in a Valentine's Day group all of the members of which are guys. With a few exceptions.
 

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David, now you are just acting stupid. It's fun only till a certain point.
 
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