[Cupid] Terraining Contest - Passion

[AIagremm]

I have a feeling Cupid was created by pedophiles.

 

[Paillan]

but...but... you are on mine to :3
also i will add him (sob)

 

[David]

I looks so damn epic everywhere!

 

[Paillan]

no you don´t i yust added you because your funny to watch.

WIP5

Changelog:
Deleted ALL fog.
Added cupid.(the baby thingy whit wings and a partially invisible bow.)
Backstory: Cupid shoot an arrow to me, putting me in love whit the girl, but he didn´t shoot one to the girl, which doesn´t responds to my suffering (based on real life,saddly).

 

[Amargaard]

Added my final entry to the group's pictures - Didn't know what more I could do to it :l

Where did you get that awzum Cupid model from?! :O
And if you could change my team color to teal, it'd be nice

 

[Paillan]

thats not an cupid model, in fact, its the fusion of 3 models!.
A baby model
A bow model
Some wings model
Yes i will iive you your team color and them add this to the group pictures.

 

[David]

Paillan, looks so messy... ecpecially the water!

 

[Paillan]

the water before this one looked messy.

 

[David]

It still does...

 

[Paillan]

go to mess whit your sama better.
Don´t mess whit me, you won´t like when i am angry, even if i am who nows how many kilometers away form you.

 

[David]

Oh the pain :/

 

[Amargaard]

You too, don't get into another struggle - we're on the same team, remember? We didn't recruit you from Mad King's legion to quarrel with each other! >.>

 

[Paillan]

yeah, i think you did, as i passed from side quite involuntary, wondering where´s the crystal rod...

 

[Amargaard]

Involuntary? You walked around, blabbering endlessly about your redemption and your gratefulness for joining Santa's side
What crystal rod? The one I traded for the "Not Twilight" book? You should read it by the way, it's lovely!

 

[Paillan]

If twilight is shit, them no twilight is shit inside of a diamond.
I said QUITE.

 

[GreeN!X]

decided to make at least 1 wip today.! yay.! I'm kinda being productive.!

WIP 1

 

[Deleted member 212788]

Juno, I'd strongly suggest using one of B2M's, eubz or Fingolfin's trees since the ones you're using now are made for playable terrains not Sceenshots. Also, do your best to avoid tiles being visible close-up since that reveals the fact that they are low res and become blurry. And rework the mountains to not be as spike, spiky mountains + the bloody red mist makes for a horror scene rather than a love one.

 

[GreeN!X]

Yeah... I'm just gonna redo my terrain in the UTM because it's on a normal map at the moment..

 

[David]

Is that--

 

[GreeN!X]

Nah, Uploaded the second WIP as my final entry.. too lazy.. :3

 

[kari0003]

Too bad that we could help you improve it much further.

 

[Paillan]

tnx juno, i had second place, now i have third D:

 

[Bernkastel]

But you acted like you didn't care about the places. Shush.

 

[David]

Dont worry Paillan I'll make you last.

 

[Paillan]

nah, i doubt it.

 

[Amargaard]

@Juno: Personally I would have sized down the tree models, and made a lot more of them all over the place - which would make the other side of the river seem farther away, as it feels too close at the moment - and it would also make sure the mountains seem more big and mountain-like, instead of being on the same level as the trees.
Then I'd say use some rock models as cliffs/mountains instead of just the average tiles - which would make it seem more 3D and vary in looks.
Thirdly, you should update your custom tileset, adding several grass tiles to mix with eachother in the small forest, and the sunken ruins sand for the shores.
Also, you should add some jars with flowers or flowerpots to the foreground, and perhaps some vines hanging from the roof above Cupid and Psyche.
Lastly, I'd recommend making something even more unique as the view of the romantic couple, like a waterfall from the mountains into the lake or something

Just suggestions, in case you get over you laziness

 

[Paillan]

waterfall into a lake huh? seems original :3

 

[Amargaard]

Look at it this way - a mountain with a waterfall is more original than a mountain, you know ^^

 

[Paillan]

mine is a bit of that... i was thinking in a lake of my country but hell yeah, i wasn´t even a 10% like it.
tried.