Counterattack

[Moderator]

21:53, 6th Jan 2011
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[APproject]

I rate this resource by 1/5 and I strongly recommend it to be rejected due to its poor quality.

1. This is not a campaign, please fix Type of map.
2. Description is badly developed, please expand it and add proper credits.
3. Cinematic mode should be On instantly, I don't want to see boards and minimap for a part of second before cinematic mode is on.
4. When camera was changed to the spot where Knights were fighting, the fade in - out has messed up and occured twice. (Just at the beginning)
5. Terrain and environment art is tragic.
6. There are no Objectives when the game starts.
7. How am I supposed to build or train anything if I have 0 gold / lumber? And In order to gather gold, I need to build up a Town Hall.
8. I cannot skip cinematic.
9. There was no warning that a hero cannot fall in the battle.
10. In the cinematic's transmission, it was said: *Voice of battle*. Well obviously battle has no voice, a sound perhaps.
11. Some transmissions in the later gaming are being sent without cinematic mode, it should be displayed with Game - Display Text or something, not sure at the moment, because I cannot se the transmission.
12. Why an earth this map is so big, 20 MB for a basic wc3 models without any import? I could check it in World Editor, but so far I see no point to pour any effort into this.
13. After some time, Objective appeared, but it was not clear enough, because it contains mistakes as like not finished objective.
14. Why there are neutral forces hiding behind the destructible rocks? It's not rescueable obviously.
15. Victory conditions does not exist.

Honestly, do a single maps of a campaign are allowed to be uploaded in THW? I surely hope not. For now, it is a work of a day or even less. Not acceptable for sure.

 

[PetrKubelka]

Gameplay is not good
what i making with Paesants ? I havent got Golds
Terrain is horrible.
Not chance to win
1/5 Vote for rejected

 

[Shadowraze]

LOL..
[-] Poor Terrain
[-] Bad GameplaY
[=] Improve Your Description WithBB Code
[=] Add Some Tileset, Doodads in the map too make it more nicer look alike
[-]Leakness, [=]Suggestion
endfunction
[EDIT] 1.5/5

 

[human-master112]

this is probably the worst map ive ever seen sent in with such a poor quality. even by not opening the map i can tell that it is horrible by just looking at the mini map
lol get some help
0/5 rejected

 

[Bloodbath]

Oh shit i just wasted the 13 minutes of my life..=_=

 

[light bolt30]

Here's a list of BB Codes to improve the description. The terrain is really plain, not much variation of tile sets and doodads are involved. Please add a map type as well. The map size is really too much for this type of map since you've added alot of useless custom things that will not have much of an effect on the gameplay but increases the size of the file, please remove the custom materials and use the basic wc3 models, music, etc.

 

[APproject]

You didn't pay almost any attention in order to fix points, mentioned in post #2. No major changes have been made in order to rise the rating of mine.
My rating remains 1/5 and I am still voting for rejection.

 

[Arcisal]

Good Points:
-Null-
Bad Points:
1) Bad Terrain
2) Bad Gameplay
3) Usage of Warcraft Characters impractical
4) Grammar Errors

I know you've heard the wrong points probably a million times. Maybe instead of saying you'll upload another awesome map in the next hour (which I think is impossible for anyone), you should take the time to develop your map into something great and not submit a map which has been obviously spent on 30 minutes.

Here are some suggestions:
IMPROVE YOUR TERRAIN! If you don't know how to, just search the internet for guides or ask other fellow Hive members for tips and ask questions any map-maker or moderator would be more than happy to help you to develop your map into a better one. Check the Hive forums to help you give a better understanding on terraining.

IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR! Yes, Improve your Grammar. Check your map thoroughly for grammar and spelling mistakes. And try not to use names from the Warcraft Universe, sounds unoriginal and boring. Create or invent your own names and write your own storyline.

IMPROVE THE GAMEPLAY OF YOUR MAP! Try to improve the gameplay of your map. Make your own units and be creative with the terrain. Use triggers innovatively and surprise the players in fantastic ways. Make the game more balanced and fair for both sides.

I'm not going to rate this map just yet. I'm going to wait for the next upload first and see how it has improved.

 

[-Kobas-]

Type:Campaign

Please make real campaign, or change map type!