[Comic]"Desert Raiders vol.1"

[Dr00d]

First of maybe 4 volumes. Just the start of our hero's story. Hope you like it. (Yeah I know it's short.)

Will Trinx the Troll save him and his friends? Could he be planing something? Will he die of starvation in his cave of a home? Find out next time...

 

[frostwhisper]

Its Voodoo.

Voodoo Voodoo Voodoo.

Not Voodo.

Otherwise I like the plot

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Dr00dy was once more on weed. :< Why do people use weed.
Weird but ok story for my part.. <_< Would give a 6/10 and stuff.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

/amazed by such realistic graphics.

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Yeah, that was just plain terrible.

 

[Dr00d]

Trust me, that frame was WAY better then how it looked the first time. -.-'

 

[JarrardKO]

ROFL, that attempt at blood was so horrible that I actually lol'd.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Dr00d should work at Bollywood, they need a 'special effectsman just like you.'

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Trust me, that frame was WAY better then how it looked the first time. -.-'

Thats impossible. There is no way it could be crappier than this. Seriously, with a decent painting program, you'd be able to do better.

Seriously, even MS Paint gives better results.

How much time do you put into your comics anyway? If you had seriously cared about the quality of your comics, I dont think you'd have let that one pass, and I'm pretty sure there wouldn't be any spelling mistakes.

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

I like it!

Meh char limit...

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

Its ok....too short...blood was terrible...

 

[THE_END]

And voodoo is spelled with two "O"s
Just wanted to point that out

 

[Dr00d]

Seriously, even MS Paint gives better results.

Thats what I use. -.-'

The blood effect was out of WoW, paint just dosn't like it that much.

 

[Elenai]

Is the land scape Draenor?

Because if it is....then why is Azeroth highly visible in the skies? I always thought Dreanor was a planet alot further away?!

....it is a decent comic though.

 

[frostwhisper]

Err... its in Tanaris, El.

But the map viewer is bugged and shows the sky from the caverns of time over the desert. And that sky looks... spacey.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Do we keep going on like this about the skies?

 

[Dr00d]

Yes WoW Map viewer loads in the Caverns of Time sky box so I turned that off and added in that moon/Azeroth. It was that or a giant belt of asteroids floating by.

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Thats what I use. -.-'

The blood effect was out of WoW, paint just dosn't like it that much.

Why do you copy and paste blood particles? Can't you notice the white behind the red?

Smudging dark red would have been ten times better.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

Better yet, cut your finger, wipe it on the screen, and take a picture.

 

[Pyritie]

Well at least there's more of a plot line and less of a wtf.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Yup.

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[DrSick]

bad comic bad comic

 

[frostwhisper]

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

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[Jacek]

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

 

[Pyritie]

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

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[TheDivineBoss]

Shaddap.
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[Dr00d]

Stop spaming please.

 

[DrSick]

... comment is neither supportive, nor does it give constructive criticism => comment should not exist.

 

[DrSick]

its no smap i just say its a bad comic

 

[Dr00d]

Thread was cleaned, but there was spam.

 

[Pyritie]

Well instead of saying "bad comic bad comic" maybe you could say what you didn't like, so he can do better next time.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

Blood, cliched dialogue, short, the fact that most of the graphics were made using MS paint, the fact that Dr00d is a gunophile and proud of it, the cliched storyline... the unamazing use of wow models... oh, and everything.

 

[Dr00d]

Fair enough I guess. New ones are coming soon, story is almost done.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Blood, cliched dialogue, short, the fact that most of the graphics were made using MS paint, the fact that Dr00d is a gunophile and proud of it, the cliched storyline... the unamazing use of wow models... oh, and everything.

Gimp is a great way to edit pictures.

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

graphics were made using MS paint

UH MAH GUDZ!!! j00 DiSrrEspectid Ms Paint!!!