Coilfang Automaton.blp

[Moderator]

09:16, 5th Jul 2012
M0rbid: Currently the green parts look totally flat and to unconnected to the rest of the skin. As if they were painted over the rest of the skin with paint, which is - for me - kinda ruining it. Try to get the connection better. Also the rest of skin could use a bit more definition and shading, aswell as contrast in order to get approved.

Set to "Needs Fix" in consensus for the meantime.

Update by Kwaliti

Just a bit more contrast on the metal plates and you're all set.

Update by Kwaliti

Change sufficient, skin approved.

 

[Vengeancekael]

Neat, the green is odd at first, but I've gotten used to it now, especially the "leaves" around the weapon, looks cool
I just don't like the grass coming out of its back.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Nicey, but needs more shading!

 

[Misha]

Neat, the green is odd at first, but I've gotten used to it now, especially the "leaves" around the weapon, looks cool
I just don't like the grass coming out of its back.

that's not grass it's the fel-core-thingie fel reavers have

Nicey, but needs more shading!

*points to locked suggestion box* sorry, mate, i doubt i can do much with a tiny blp now

 

[Situ]

dont know, but there comes nothing in my mind how i culd use this

 

[Misha]

dont know, but there comes nothing in my mind how i culd use this

well, it is pretty WoW Burning Crusade-specific

 

[Situ]

i played burning crusade but i never saw something like this^^

 

[Misha]

i played burning crusade but i never saw something like this^^

i think you saw that giant robot thingie walking around hellfire peninsula. Fel Reaver is the inspiration

 

[RiotZ]

This concept has been done many times before, but this one has great execution. 5\5.

Lack of shading is what makes the metal shiny btw.

 

[Misha]

This concept has been done many times before, but this one has great execution. 5\5.

Lack of shading is what makes the metal shiny btw.

have you read the description? i'll not bother adding more because the image is too tiny now

 

[RiotZ]

have you read the description? i'll not bother adding more because the image is too tiny now

I was saying lack of shading was good.

 

[Misha]

I was saying lack of shading was good.

ah.. blame my English understanding then and thanks

 

[rcshaggy]

i think you saw that giant robot thingie walking around hellfire peninsula. Fel Reaver is the inspiration

http://www.wowpedia.org/images/thumb/9/98/FelReaverGoesVroom.jpg/674px-FelReaverGoesVroom.jpg

You mean something like this right and good to make a Naga robot. Wonder if it will serve a purpose of fighting for the creators of them.

 

[Misha]

http://www.wowpedia.org/images/thumb/9/98/FelReaverGoesVroom.jpg/674px-FelReaverGoesVroom.jpg

You mean something like this right and good to make a Naga robot. Wonder if it will serve a purpose of fighting for the creators of them.

think so

 

[Gen Bloodhorn]

looks very 2d when i used this

 

[-Grendel]

not a big fan of those sprouting green things.

 

[67chrome]

The metalic parts are ok, what with the crisp edges and decent shading and coloration. The green bits make it look touched up by MS paint though (I thought the fines were supposed to be fuel drops spurting out at first). As is the bright green parts need a lot of work, if they're supposed to be glowing add a little white in the center and darken the metal right around them a bit. I'd also recommend just getting rid of the fins on the side of the head. The chain on the weapon seems a bit on the flimsy side as well, you should make that a little thicker, or add some backing behind it. I'd also recommend dulling down the green on the chain considerably, making more a standard metalic color or at least a fel-metal alloy.

Cool to see you releasing some skin btw

 

[Mgeterno11]

Looks nice, reminds me of a Naga. However, it need some recoloring, too, especially the green spots. They should be shaded and texured. Good luck. 4/5

 

[Darkfang]

For some reason the weapon looks like an strange consolator to me... I think you should change it, else, you should know that the colors such as blue or purple tend to fit better with the "bronze" u used.

 

[Misha]

..now i'm really gonna report the next simpleton that suggests something without actually reading the description ><
i cannot change anything now, as it would screw up the details. do you get it? the pic is now small and any edit will look unprofessional and blurry

and i couldn't care less if you mods reject this skin... wouldn't be the first time.. >_>
..stupid people and stupid modem.. /rant

you Chrome are excluded from this vent, but i really dunno if i can do anything. i wanted to include a few white details to turn the green thingies into crystalline green structure, but.. this now can only be tweaked by a pixel artist, and i am certainly not one.

 

[Misha]

so.. kinda updated..

 

[Sky Green]

Great skin, it reminds me of the swords and sandals automatons. looks real smooth you did a great job Misha

 

[TheRanmar]

Looks pretty badass. A bit plain perhaps, but pretty neat nontheless. My only concern is the highlights. It looks like there is more than one lightsource. This could be fixed by moving the highlights to the borders of the stomach plates instead of in the middle of them.

 

[Misha]

another one that hasn't read my description, i see..

but thanks guys, I'll try to get lights right when i make a next skin c:

 

[InfernalTater]

Misha, pl0x change this, this, this, and this.

JK, I read the description. It's pretty cool, but like others have said there are things that could be fixed, if only you still had the original image.

 

[clockwork2]

Wow!

 

[Narandza]

I don't like it actually, but I don't see any reason for this not to get approved...

 

[Misha]

hmm.. i gotta figure other ways of texturing too..

 

[Cakedog345]

Seems nice (though I'm not crazy about this shade of green) !

 

[Misha]

why is this not even LOOKED AT by mods?? Come ON! reject or approve, so i know if i can texture or should stick to making models >.<

 

[67chrome]

The mod line-up changed significantly when there was all those people banned from the site not to long ago, there isn't that many Mods anymore, and I think most of them are in charge of a range of areas rather than just one spot.

You should probably poke one of them to get this resource approved or rejected though XD

 

[Misha]

The mod line-up changed significantly when there was all those people banned from the site not to long ago, there isn't that many Mods anymore, and I think most of them are in charge of a range of areas rather than just one spot.

You should probably poke one of them to get this resource approved or rejected though XD

i did once and there was "you should wait more" answer =u=

 

[Bloody Wolf]

Good concept and shiny metal effects but i think you should change the "fel-core-thingie" cuz it kinda looks like grass.
And what about you make the green things on the edge of his weapon rotate like a chainsaw (just an idea)

 

[Misha]

Good concept and shiny metal effects but i think you should change the "fel-core-thingie" cuz it kinda looks like grass.
And what about you make the green things on the edge of his weapon rotate like a chainsaw (just an idea)

you can't really do that with the texture only, mate =P

 

[SlayabThoR]

Looks like a robot imo, still cool.

 

[Misha]

Looks like a robot imo, still cool.

it is supposed to be one

 

[Statharas]

Sooo... Not AoM?

 

[Bloody Wolf]

you can't really do that with the texture only, mate =P

Well i guess ur right i am not a expert at skins and models

 

[clockwork2]

Sooo... Not AoM?

Definitely not AOM, unless Automatons became a faction of their own.

 

[LostSpectre]

Some of the best models I've seen in awhile.

 

[DUTY OF RS]

i love it =D

 

[DD Mikasa]

WoW.Really neat!
The trident remindes me of Ash from Evil Dead series

 

[daverave1212]

Holy cow, this looks amazing O_O
5/5