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» Vengeancekael:[c] 「Profile :: Hive Staff」 |
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Poor and lacking Terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Poor Gameplay, not a lot of originality or fun: General Mapping Tutorials
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» Rules: [c] 「Map Submission」 |
» Contact: [c] 「Staff Contact」 |
Verdict + Uh... Burning Crusade recreation? - Unpolished - Boring - Lacking terrain |
The map is extremely unpolished, remove selection circles during cutscenes, pause units during cutscenes so that they don't suddenly start attacking nearby enemies.
A night elf Archer saying "sir" is very odd and not very elf-like.
The second chapter is useless, just implement it into the first/third chapter.
Overall bad camera work, try moving around the cam constantly and don't move it through cliffs/ground.
Some angles are also awkward, like the first dialogue with Ysiel, it's just the ground and you can barely see the player. Plus it lags because of the distant sight.
The game is very boring with the default skills.
The terrain starts degrading over time, the first & second chapters are acceptable, but then the third chapter has an empty terrain, missing details like flowers, water doodads, etc.
Unacceptable |
Suggestions:
- Clear selection circles during cutscenes
- 'Book of Light' has a usable icon visual
- 'Book of Light' = 'Paladin's Amulet'
- Apply cinematic mode right at the beginning of the 1st chapter
Moderated Version: Initial
Date: 22/Mar/2013 03:19:34