BTNSerpenting

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02:26, 12th Nov 2015
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

I don't actually get what icon represents
. Needs to define more

 

[The Panda]

I honestly suggest not too draw out your icons on pencil and scan them in because how your doing it gives out a sketchy type icon that needs smoothing out because the lines are so choppy. But, the colors on this are confusing too me, they are also very dark and need highlights, I also suggest changing the name too something else because thats very confusing as well. So overall the whole icon needs defining.

 

[Roland]

Jesus Christ. This needs to be in the "Director's Cut"

No really.. I mean it.. Improve your art please.. It's VERY Confusing and... Obscure to understand.

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

Do not Draw it from Any Real Paper >_< . There are many Apps You Can Use - Like - Gimp,Photoshop,or Paint.exe or Paint.Net
Im Not Expert but This is Just Advice.

 

[DaneTheBeast]

It's weird that a serpent has a human tongue

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

It's weird that a serpent has a human tongue

lols >_< I Didn't know that it was a Tongue >_<
The Tongue Looks Like a Neck to Me >_<

 

[WhiteFang]

Snakes have thin split tongues,like this

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Like i said about the other icons of yours: in order to succeed, you have to learn certain things.
Here you can find sufficient material that might help you:
2D Art Tutorials, Art Tutorials/Books/etc.
You need to define your objects properly.
Improve the shapes, proportions, anatomy...
Choose a suitable color palette.
There must be a source of light, so, add shadows and highlights.
Please read some tutorials and practice(if you want to learn something).