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13:03, 17th Nov 2014
Sin'dorei300: First of all, i see only gray and black and no other colors, which from start makes it boring.
U chose to represent the entire sword, which doesn't help to put in value - neither textures, nor any details.
Plenty of space remains unused.
The effect is represented poorly, looks boring and doesn't bring anything new.
If u want to keep the sword's size, u could draw an interesting effect involving the sword (ability\characteristic\circumstance) to fill the unused space.
If not, zoom in, focusing on a part of it.
Sin'dorei300: First of all, i see only gray and black and no other colors, which from start makes it boring.
U chose to represent the entire sword, which doesn't help to put in value - neither textures, nor any details.
Plenty of space remains unused.
The effect is represented poorly, looks boring and doesn't bring anything new.
If u want to keep the sword's size, u could draw an interesting effect involving the sword (ability\characteristic\circumstance) to fill the unused space.
If not, zoom in, focusing on a part of it.